Friday, April 17, 2009

7minutes in Heaven with Gaara (lemon)

You nervously pleaded: "Come on you guys, this game is completely pointless, I don't see why-"

Sakura: "Or stop being sucha chicken!" she whispered "you knew you've wanted this since day one" you blushed.
Ino nodded: "Yeah, you want nothing more to be shoved in a closet for an hour with your beloved Gaara" you went redder.

You: "You said it was seven minutes!"

Sakura: "That depends on whether or not you're ready to get out…" she giggled.

Ino: "There are like ten closets in this house Akauri, if you and your sand man need more time we can use another one" you blushed even more.

You: "We're just friends…."

Sakura/Ino: "Whatever" they shoved you in the closet and locked the door. Leaving you inside with Gaara. Your lifetime crush. You felt awkward. You couldn’t see him, due to the dark factor, but you think that was him breathing. You stayed near the door, your back touching it, and slid down till you were in a seating position. You didn't do well in silence.

You: "…S-So…Umm… We don't have to do a-anything if you don't w-want to…" you silently cursed yourself for stuttering. Let's just be thanking God he couldn't see your blush. It was quiet for a while then you heard him speak.

Gaara: "Are you scared about being in here with me?"

You: "You know I-I'm not afraid of you…"

Gaara: "I know, but you seen nervous." He could read you like a book.

You: "It's j-just…."

Gaara: "Just what?" you blushed more biting your bottom lip not wanting to tell him about your feelings. "You can tell me." You gasped a little hearing how he was so close now. He whispered in such a sensual manner it made your heart race. He was maybe only inches away. He was hovering over you a little too.

Gaara: "You can tell me anything, Akauri…" his mouth was right next your ear. Your face went darker as you continued to fight the urge to kiss him. You put a hand on his chest and gripped his shirt feeling his warmth.

You: "Gaara I… I've always…" you couldn’t finish because of his tongue gliding across your lips sending shivers up and down your spine. He only did it twice but it was enough to almost make you go mad. To feel his tongue on your lips…

Gaara: "I've always liked you more then everyone else… I've felt this strong attachment to you…" what was he saying? He licked your top lip. Then you bottom lip, excruciatingly slow making heat shoot threw your being.

You whimpered: "Gaara…" he began sucking on your neck and you accidently moaned when one of Gaara's hand fell open on your bare thigh. He trailed it up ward till he was only an inch away from your most private spots. You squirmed a little under him feeling dizzy from the pleasure. Soon enough his lips fell on yours muffling any sound you both tried to make after that and he pinned you to the ground. His kiss involved his lips, his teeth, and his tongue. You kissed him trying to match his power but failing letting him have complete control.

You moaned: "G-Gaara...?" he stroked your face.

Gaara: "Shh...it’s ok..." you nodded, already knowing he would never hurt you and kissed him back wrapping your arms around his neck while he went back under your skirt beginning to rub against your womanhood. You began panting as your arousal pooled between your legs. Gaara used his other hand to start massaging your breast and unbuttoning your shirt. You felt cool air breeze against your chest that was now bare and then the warmth of Gaara's mouth over take your left nipple. You felt something harden against your inner thigh and blushed even more feeling Gaara press his clothed swollen member against you. Gaara’s mouth left your now cold nipple and repeated on the next then kissed your lips then broke it breathing heavily.

Gaara: "I want you so much... Please don't deny me..."


You: "I want you too... I'm not going to deny you..." he smiled and kissed you again then unzipped his pants. You hear a knock on the door.

Sakura: "Gaara? Akauri? You in there? Times up?" Gaara didn't stop kissing you, and you didn't stop kissing him. Nothing was going to ruin this moment and what was about to happen.

Ino giggled: "Let's let them have their fun" and you two continued where you left off. He slid into your body overcoming your virgin barrier as you whimpered and latched onto him for support and he instatnly tensed.

Gaara: "You didn't tell me you were a virgin... I'm so sorry..." you shook your head.

You: "It's ok... I wanted you to be my first..." you smiled and kissed him which he instantly gave you as you both moaned in pleasure. Eh, they had like ten other closets. You would need this one for just a bit longer.

169 comments:

  1. Replies
    1. same here...he's awesome...

      Delete
    2. Wow that was pretty good but the "you" part kinda threw me off lol

      Delete
  2. WHOA! That was great!

    ReplyDelete
  3. omg, wow, aww gaara was sweet "i'm so sorry, you didn't tell me" awwwwww ^_^

    ReplyDelete
  4. awwwwwwwwwwww that was awsome

    ReplyDelete
  5. GAARA IS SOOOOOOOOO HOT LOVE HIM

    ReplyDelete
  6. aaawwwww gaara is so kawaii!!!!!

    ReplyDelete
  7. Awww.. That is probably one of the best ones I've ever read. Sure, Gaara was a little out of character but to make a love story with him in it you have to bend his personality a little. I also loved how you actually write well. Very good. I love it [and Gaara, hehehehehee].

    ReplyDelete
  8. Awwwwww...........I love Gaara hes sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo H-O-T!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    ReplyDelete
  9. hmmp it wasent that great -_-...(WTF THAT WAS THE BEST STORY EVER!!!! AND GAARA HE IS SOOO HAWWT!!!!) loser...

    ReplyDelete
  10. OMG u need to make more of these

    ReplyDelete
  11. I love this one...<3 good job

    ReplyDelete
  12. *dreamy sigh* I think my computer exploded and Im in heaven...

    ReplyDelete
  13. I LUV GAARA!!!! And wow

    ReplyDelete
  14. could ya possibly make a kakashi story .... ur storys r amazing!!!!!!!!!!

    ReplyDelete
  15. thnaks but sorry.... i really only write stories for Gaara...

    ReplyDelete
  16. Gaara is freaking sexy! more Gaara!GAARA! GAARA!GAARA!!

    ReplyDelete
  17. another gaara lemonn!!!!!!!!!!!! Pleasey :3

    ReplyDelete
  18. I really loved this! keep writing about Gaara! He's the best!

    ReplyDelete
  19. yay! thanks! i will... very soon... maybe even today! :D

    ReplyDelete
  20. you have to write more Gaara lemons!This was fab!

    ReplyDelete
  21. hehe, i just wrote one! enjoy! its called "You're mine now"

    ReplyDelete
  22. Are you goin to write anymore? that was brill!

    ReplyDelete
  23. thanks! but there will always be more Gaara ~.^

    ReplyDelete
  24. ooohhh! i love Gaara sooo much!Keep writting about him never mind anyone else its all about Gaara!lol! :)

    ReplyDelete
  25. XD i know right? and that is why i have 16 love stories about him on quizilla! lol... ^///^U

    ReplyDelete
  26. i luv gaara he's like my fav he so hot and awsome i wish i was on naruto

    ReplyDelete
  27. me too, but I'd rather have my character Siuske on there, she'd be sooo adorible!

    ReplyDelete
  28. this was sooo hot! you have to write more about Gaara! and know you hear it all the time but you really are good!x) I <3 Gaara!

    ReplyDelete
  29. lol, but i never get tired of it! thanks! i will!

    ReplyDelete
  30. OMG. I love it. Please, please, please make more! *begs*

    ReplyDelete
  31. I need more Gaara! That was sweet <3

    ReplyDelete
  32. well remember, if you need more Gaara, theres always more on my quizilla page... like 16 stories...

    ReplyDelete
  33. It was sooo cool!XD

    -darkfire2you

    ReplyDelete
  34. make a lemon for kakashi >.< plaeeeeesssseee ! i bet it'll be just like all the others, great !

    ReplyDelete
  35. gaara is soooo cute >.< t was the best lemon i've ever read for gaara >.< [p.s i wrote the one comment above this too 0.o]

    ReplyDelete
  36. omg that was so smexy I LOVE GAARA!!!!

    ReplyDelete
  37. whoa this is really good i've written one about him too but i'm to scared to put it on the internet

    ReplyDelete
  38. awsome im gunna read em all

    ;D

    ReplyDelete
  39. I LOVE GAARA HES HOT ^-^ ur the best wrighter ever

    ReplyDelete
  40. OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!I THINK I DIED AND WENT TO MANGA HEAVEN!!I'VE READ ALMOST ALL YOUR STORIES,BUT I LOVE THIS ONE THE MOST BECAUSE MY SMEXY HUSBAND IS IN IT!I LOVE YOUR STORIES AND GAARA SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!X0

    ReplyDelete
  41. Gaara deserves to be loved and not treated as an outcast. Way to go

    -darkfire2you

    ReplyDelete
  42. garra is sooooo sexy and this is the best lemon i've ever read!!

    ReplyDelete
  43. THAT WAS THE MOST STUPID, SEXY DRIVEN, SINFUL THING I'VE EVER HAD THE HORROR OF READING!!!!! YOU ARE SICK MINDED!!!!! . . . I LOVED IT!!!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Jeeeeeeezzzz, buddy/girl,... calm down...o_O

      Delete
  44. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Myyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy Goooooooooooooooddddddddd

    ReplyDelete
  45. Aw... that was sweet :) I've read your stories, you are really talented. don't stop writing! :D

    ReplyDelete
  46. what's your quizilla username so I can look you up? Mine's NarutoxMusic please send me a message!

    ReplyDelete
  47. That was the best story ive ever read you should be a writer!!!!!!!!

    ReplyDelete
  48. Canya make one with Iruka sensei?I lub him......BUT THAT WAS SO HOT!!!!i need a shower now...

    ReplyDelete
  49. vampireprincess10101February 11, 2010 at 6:10 PM

    I LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEE GARRA-KUN SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH

    ReplyDelete
  50. the best. gaara iz 2 hot.i wish i wuz a character...well i made tp 1 alredy.nasari iz da name.made trillions ov lemonz....but i wrote it on papr.damn u broke computa.anyway awsome story.coold u write 1 usin my char scinc ya know. oh yea gaara -n- nasari 4eva. (sory other gaara lovas) p.s fabo lemon

    ReplyDelete
  51. Gaara,shika,nije and kiba are my fav ones^^

    ReplyDelete
  52. mine 2.came bak 2 reed it again.betta second time around.:) i think that they all rock!

    ReplyDelete
  53. Awesome. It was really good

    ReplyDelete
  54. GAARA-KUN! OMG OMG OMG x3
    I'm in love! xD
    Thank you for writing a story like this :D

    ReplyDelete
  55. Gaara is too freakin amazing for his own gud...but i luv it! lolz,this was sweet. i luv ur other stories on Quizilla. They are amazing. U've got ure talent.

    ReplyDelete
  56. GAARA IS MINE AND MINE ALONE SO LEAVE HIM 2 ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    ReplyDelete
  57. Wow i love you Gaara!!!!^^
    this is so hot!!!

    ReplyDelete
  58. wow thats the real Gaara hes realy loveing the oulny reason he acts the way he dose in the showes is no one understands him and his own dad tryed to kill him so he doaent want to get close to some one just to get hurt

    Garra-kun is so hot but Kibba-sama is the best if i was in naruto i would want to be with Kibba and Gaara would be a realy realy good friend

    ReplyDelete
  59. that was the most awesome gaara story I have EVER laid eyes apon

    ReplyDelete
  60. please write another

    ReplyDelete
  61. That was so awseome! I read all of your work and I love it! I want to become an Author when I gorw up and reading this inspired me more. BTW Kiba is my favorite! It was the best Kiba story I ever read.

    ReplyDelete
  62. this is probably the BEST Gaara lemon ive EVER READ!!!!* fangirl scream* KYAAAAAA!!!!!

    ReplyDelete
  63. OMG U ROCK GAARA!!!! I mean... I wish it was me?

    ReplyDelete
  64. WOOOOOOHH GAARA! i luvv him

    ReplyDelete
  65. Dud this was lame. This has to be the shortest, and worst Gaara lemon I've read.

    ReplyDelete
  66. thanks! my user name on quizzila is naruangirl16

    ReplyDelete
  67. Very cool!I luv Gaara!he's sooooo kawaii and smexy!!!!Good job,u r awesome!!!

    ReplyDelete
  68. awwwwwwww...that was really sweet!!! pls write more!!!!

    ReplyDelete
  69. personally i perfer sweet over sexy...good tho gaara.is.......(is wat)......EFFIN H-O-t!!!

    ReplyDelete
  70. pls write more plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz

    ReplyDelete
  71. WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW that was so goooood.....write more!

    ReplyDelete
  72. i want gaara too.

    ReplyDelete
  73. OMG?? Crap, is that even a story?? ==||... but i think it'll be better if you do not write those lemony stuff...

    ReplyDelete
  74. I love all your stories. :3
    I wish I could write that well.
    And I'm not asking you to write more, Im BEGGING. :D

    ReplyDelete
  75. dude that was sweet

    ReplyDelete
  76. I LOVE your lemons. Please write about Shino. I am a major Shino fangirl.

    ReplyDelete
  77. I love your lemons! Can you write a Seven minutes in heaven with Kakashi next?

    ReplyDelete
  78. could you do a shino seven minutes in heaven? i love your work!

    ReplyDelete
  79. OOOOOMMMMMMMMMMGGGG!!! I'm speechless, that is the best story i've ever seen...I LOVE GAARA, u are really talented, not kidding.
    THE BEST, Keep writing about Gaara.
    HE is SOOOOOOOOO HOT...HE'S MINE. ;)

    ReplyDelete
  80. Gaara is only my second choice by like a tiny-little bit. My first choice is Shino. Write about Shino or Im gonna go CRAZY. I love your work.

    ReplyDelete
  81. That was really good!! lol i luv gaara! good job ;>

    ReplyDelete
  82. good job! gaara is so sweet in this one...:3

    ReplyDelete
  83. NOO! I LOVE IT! But I want more detail haha!

    ReplyDelete
  84. ~kyaa!!!~ I would SOOOOOOO marry Gaara if I could! I was probably blushing the whole time I was reading this! *fan girl scream* I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

    ReplyDelete
  85. HATE GAARA AND LOVE HIM SOMETIME BUT I ALSO HAVE STANGE DREAM.ANYWAY LOVE THE STORY GOOD LUCK LOL.

    ReplyDelete
  86. SORRY, i didnt finish it friken, was HOT

    ReplyDelete
  87. sorry i didnt finish it was sssssssssssssoooooooooooooooooooooooooooo hot YEA!!!

    ReplyDelete
  88. OMFG!!!! I LOVE ME SOME GAARA!!! HE SO SMEXY!!
    I like how he was like "please don't deny me":3
    SOOO FREAKIN AWESOME!!! <3

    ReplyDelete
  89. WOOT WOOT!!! I got shivers just reading that! Gaara is awesome! I luved it!! Make more Gaara lemons!!!!! PLZ!!!!!!XD <3

    ReplyDelete
  90. sorry but gaara is not like that unless he loves someone more then anyone or anything. and by the way gaara dosent love anyone the syomble on his forhead shows that a demon loveing only himself. GOOD LUCK on making him love you guys. i know that because i have been thought lot just like him . ithink he will like you guys.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. If you have read the manga or watched the anime then you would understand how garra changed after the chunin exams. Due to garras fight with naruto garra became nicer,not psychotic, kind hearted and naruto became a brotherly figure to garra, garra also became the kazekage and was loved by the villagers

      Delete
  91. i think garra is awsome dont u

    ReplyDelete
  92. AAAWWWW!!!! gaara!! ur too sweet!!! :3 this was AWESOME!!!!!!!!! <3333333333

    ReplyDelete
  93. this one was so romantic!!! ^^ i loved it ur the best! *tears fall from eye*

    ReplyDelete
  94. OMG I <3 Gaara!!!!!!!!!!!!! U made meh happy! :D U ish cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    ReplyDelete
  95. Awesome!But you know,a 'Bad' Gaara lemon would be totally awesome!

    ReplyDelete
  96. Ok, first gaara was out of character which I HATE. And second this piece of writing had a lot of mistakes, third this was not at all a lemon. You said this would be like M-rated but it had noting to make it M-rated. So overall I didn't like this. Sorry.

    ReplyDelete
  97. To the person who said the stuff ahead of me. GO FUCK YOURSELD!!!!!! Her writings are way better than anyone I have ever read. And just so you know I have read a lot of them. Ignore the jerk naruangirl16. I love your writings.

    ReplyDelete
  98. well, this is the best story i've ever read about gaara(lemon).
    keep it up lol!
    its perfect!

    ReplyDelete
  99. I love your work and I would like to suggest 2 things. 1, make one about my beloved Shino-kun. And 2, write some about different anime like One Piece or Soul Eater.

    ReplyDelete
  100. That was really great but why do you leave the end untold?

    ReplyDelete
  101. man some of you are just plain freaky on hear.........ive never incountered so many garra fans at once,and whats with all the kakashi fans ascing(sp) for a kakashi one..NEWS FLASH-she already sayed she didnt wright about anyone but garra so please stop asking. i can only inagen how fustraiting that is.anyway plase wright more storys ive already read everone of yours thats finished so please try to finnish some more.THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!

    contact me at moonlighthunter#21 also on quizilla ur awsome,keep it up!

    ReplyDelete
  102. wow, didn't know there were so many Shino fans. anyway, ur beloved Gaara just got a HELL of a lot hotter! please make more!
    oh, and more Akatsuki lemons. U haven't reached Hidan yet ;)

    ReplyDelete
  103. The person who wrote this is my freekin idol ;)

    ReplyDelete
  104. OMG!! 0__0!! *nosebleed!! that was awsome!!!!
    ^-^

    ReplyDelete
  105. O__O oh god. Gaara is so hot (melts completely) i would pass out of my crush and I got stuck in a closet together ^_^

    ReplyDelete
  106. That was so fuckin hot! If I told anyone what else I would to gaara I would probably get arrested!

    ReplyDelete
  107. gaara isn't kawaii he is sexy but i get your point i love your lemons could you do a suigetsu lemon i love him soo much he reminds me of viral in ttgl cuz the teeth also does anyone think that karin kinda looks like a female grell sutcilff the glasses the hair and they both like boys that have same color hair odd one more thing uryu in bleach and sasuke have a rip off to me cuz they are both the last of there clan same attiude and everything else i think bleach r naruto eitherway are rip offs of themselfs

    ReplyDelete
  108. Hi there!I'm new to the blogspot website,but this is very well detailed.I've also read the deleted lemons of your Gaara love stories.Also,speaking of your stories,I've read every single Gaara love story you've posted naruangirl 16.I hope you can comment me back,because it feels so great that there is a girl about my age who loves Gaara as much as I do

    ReplyDelete
  109. okay i love it but why why???? it has to be virgin again

    ReplyDelete
  110. all i have to say is

    DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    ReplyDelete
  111. I've read most/all of ur 7 min in heaven.. and this is definitely my favorite..
    Gaara's so sexy..

    ReplyDelete
  112. LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE MAKE MORE!!!!

    ReplyDelete
  113. OMFG!! THIS IS SOOO FRIGGIN' AWESOME!!
    PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ MAKE MORE!!!
    I'm good at lemons, but I will never compare to you.I am gonna call you sempai!
    Keep up the friggin' awesome work Sempai!! xD

    ReplyDelete
  114. GAARA WOULD ALWAYS BE MINE!!! *0*

    ReplyDelete
  115. That was amazing :)

    ReplyDelete
  116. I'm sorry, but I have to say that I was a little disappointed. I only say this because I've read a lot (almost all) of your stories gaara and non-gaara related and I feel as though this story doesn't meet your expectations.

    And please don't take this the wrong way I'm just saying what I think is true.

    ReplyDelete
  117. nice job i love it

    ReplyDelete
  118. Oh u have got to make more .........all I have to say is steamy and sexy I luv Gaara

    ReplyDelete
  119. OMG you are a great writer ! really!

    ReplyDelete
  120. This is EXACTLY what happen with me and my bf lol only ive never payed 7heaven -/////- we just ended up in my friends bedroom while she was at work hahahahaha! But rly this is almost like my firstime losig my "virginity" to my bf XD

    ReplyDelete
  121. i love gaara he's one of my favorites
    i wish i could marry him
    even if he is the kazekage
    i cant belive he thinks hes a monster
    he's sooo hooot
    awsome
    please make more
    frm angelica

    ReplyDelete
  122. that was amazing... I just wish more people would make forced ones.

    ReplyDelete
  123. i thought gaara did not know what love is

    ReplyDelete
  124. mmmmm soooo hot....does that make me a pervert? lol XD

    ReplyDelete
  125. I LOVE GAARA!!!!!!!!!!! i've read a lot of these, but this one has to be the best so far!!!!!!!!!

    ReplyDelete
  126. I LUV IT!!! ITZ MY FAVORITE

    ReplyDelete
  127. damn that was HOT!

    ReplyDelete
  128. Gaara is so caring "Sorry, you didnt tell me..." awww I LOVE GAARA!

    ReplyDelete
  129. this is awesome! i love gaara! <3

    ReplyDelete
  130. Wooooooooooowwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!! i LUV GAARA!!!!!!!!!!! :3

    ReplyDelete
  131. yummm... gaara is the hottest and cutiest guy ever!!! XD

    ReplyDelete
  132. eyebrowless but so f***ing hott this was awesome

    ReplyDelete
  133. I'm sorry, but that was THE WORST!
    I've seen much better lemon stories. Giving the fan the chance to expierience it as themselves. Not as one of YOUR characters. Pretty sad when you are the only one getting to fantasize this isn't it Akurai? Pathetic, always the same as usual.

    Allow me to tell you this..

    If you ever write a story like this again, make sure you check typo's, and make it not oh so personal for you. Nothing really hot here anyway. You probably are about 15. When you learn to write a better fiction, then post.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. What the fuck?! If you had nothing better to say, then don't say it! It's people like you that always bring others down. Don't read these things if your just going to criticize people's work! Yeah... sure, she might have some mistakes here and there, but that's only natural! Not everyone's perfect like you seem to be!

      And, "Allow me to tell you this..."

      People actually work hard to write things like this. Let's see you write a fanfiction. I didn't think so. Oh Yeah, there's one more thing I have to say. Stop being a fucking bitch and get a fucking life, Miss. Oh I'm So Perfect!

      Delete
  134. Oh and don't worry naruangirl16, your fanifics are awesome! Don't change them or the way you write because of some bitch that has no life and says they are pathetic. Please write more! ^.-

    ReplyDelete
  135. Isn't this on Quibblo? BTW, Me luv your writing! Neji-kun<3,Deidara-kun<3, Gaara-kun<3!!!!!

    ReplyDelete
  136. OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! o-o-o-m-m-m-g-g-g all i can say is this:eEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
    I wish Gaara was real (not just in mah head)!

    ReplyDelete
  137. Garra is hot and I love him please write more about Gaara!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this was so cool.(u r now my fave person!)

    ReplyDelete
  138. My 11 year old cousin read this and now she's scarred for life. It's an awesome story btw :).

    ReplyDelete
  139. awww I want a gaara of my own so bad

    ReplyDelete
  140. Gaara is a smexy guy lol I love him my desktop image is him lol Keep up the great work

    ReplyDelete
  141. I <3 GAARA!!! :)

    ReplyDelete
  142. >\\\\\\\\\\\\\< gaara-sama is so hot *licks lips* eventually i love bad boys

    ReplyDelete
  143. I barfed rainbows and had a epic nose bleed because of this.

    ReplyDelete
  144. I'm a person who absolutely is a Gaara fan girl! I even think he's adorable when he kills!!! ^_^ Oh, and his surprised face is kawaaaaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    ReplyDelete