Friday, April 17, 2009

7minutes in Heaven with Naruto (lemon)

How did you get yourself into this mess? Oh yeah, you remembered. It’s all Sai and Sakura’s fault. You should’ve stayed home today.

Sakura smiled and clapped her hands together: “Ok Akauri, it’s your turn”

You protested: “Hells no! Back off!”

Sakura: “You have to.”

You: “Don’t make me do it” you begged.

Sakura: “Come on, your closet mate is waiting”

You: “who is it?”

Sakura giggled: “You’ll see…”

Sai: “and try not to get pregnant”

You: “F U too.” You got up all your own and walked smoothly into the closet then closed the door.

You sighed “Let’s just get this over with.” You walked into the darkness until you felt someone. You didn’t give them a chance to speak because you got on your tip toes and kissed him softly on the lips. You felt him stiffen a little obviously not expecting you to do that. He eventually calmed into the kiss wrapping his arms around you. You felt his tongue slowly tread the lines of your lips persuading you to open allowing him into your mouth. That wondrous pink muscle of his gently stroked yours making you moan unconsciously. You blushed a little at the amount one part of him could pleasure you this much. His kiss was so pure, so honest, it made your senses come alive. He broke the kiss just a for a bit to huskily whisper you name.

Guy: “Akauri….” You couldn’t really tell who it was. But you wanted to know. Anyone who could turn you on this much needed to be with you. You opened your mouth to speak but you were cut off by his lips. You didn’t turn him away; you’d ask later when you weren’t in ecstasy. You wrapped your legs around his waist and he hoisted you up in the air then backed you onto the door with one of his hands rubbing against your butt. You moaned into his mouth hearing his own groans making you wrap your arms around his neck blushing one more shade darker when one of his hands slipped up your skirt. You felt a little uncomfortable with some guy you didn’t even know sliding up your skirt but you were too out of it to do anything about it. You were enjoying what he was doing to your lower region to much. You grinded against him and kissed him more fiercely. He moaned and pushed you against the wall while you were still hoisted up on his waist and put a hand on your right breast. His tongue left your mouth as he left butterfly kissed to your cheek down to your jaw and past it leaving a little kicky as he sucked hardly. You as he slid his hand you up your shirt grabbing a hold of your breast and played with your hard nipple. You moaned as your hands went down his angular chest rubbing his tight abs. You wanted to call out his name as he stuck a finger in your panties but suppressed knowing that you couldn’t call him name if you didn’t know it. It made you feel all the more awkward. He rubbed his fingers along your getting wet folds.

You wiggled: “Mmmmm….” Your hand reached the bulge in his pants and he grunted. His fingers went inside you and you felt a climax coming as he worked in and out of you. You panted and latched onto him as you saw white as you leaked onto his fingers.

Sakura: “Times up!” the door moved and you both fell flat on the ground. You were on bottom so you made a grunting noise. “Oo la la!” you gasped and quickly pulled up your underwear up and he pulled his fingers away. You opened your eyes to see none other then Naruto on top of you. You went deep crimson realizing you made out with-and came on-the guy you respected greatly. Though you did kinda like him.

You: “Naruto?” he kissed you again and you kissed back, letting him know you felt the same.

Sai: “Looks like he isn’t so dickless after all.” Naruto broke the kiss and yelled at you Sai.

Naruto: “Shut up Sai!” well…If you were remembering all that happened in that closet correctly…. Then he was defiantly not dickless.

108 comments:

  1. ^.^ Naruto can be so cute. ^.^ but I already have Dei-Dei!

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    1. you back off from deidara

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    2. DEI-DEI is mine!!!!!
      u two better back off
      I will kill u I swear to God!! f u

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    3. Ok? First when I'm looking for ripe lemon pics ( the fruit) , my poor eyes get scarred for life. And when I look for horrible comments I see people fighting over man-girl.

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    4. Hahaha!!! I love dei-chan with all my heart but he is a man-girl. I'm more of A yaoi fan so... I go with dei-chan and tachi

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    5. Why can't all just share?

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    6. i now see why Deidara and Sasuke hate fan girls (i am not and never will be one) you guys/girls are waaayyyyyy too posesive.

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    7. Fangirl much.......man even i fear them

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    8. yah they r kind of scarry...

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  2. Oo la la is right!

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  3. DEIDARA IS MMMMMMIIIINNNNEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  4. So HOT!!! ^_^ I think I like Naruto now!!

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  5. awww! that made me love naruto even more! hes sooooo CUTE!

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  6. SOOO hot, hes mine soooo, back off but i now know chu like deidara so u can have him but naruto iz mine. but this one was a bit dissgusting,but whatever.....WHOOOOOO,soda rulez at late night!!!XD

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  7. NARUTO! <3 ^-^ What a cutie!!

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  8. you need to write more about Naruto there aint enough about him! <3

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  9. yeah more naruto storiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeeees
    ^^

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  10. More Naruto!!!! <3

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  11. that was sooo hot i think i might be comming on to naruto myself >.<

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  12. I THINK I JUST FELL IN LOVE WITH DICKLESS EVEN MORE!!!LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!X]

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  13. naruto is sweet, but deidara and gaara are hot and my type.....

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    1. YEEESSSSSS exactly my point but Gaara is MINE so back off ho

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    2. Keep dreamin ;) ..jp ...wow fightin fo a guy who doesnt exist in reality... O.o i think even if he did exist he wouldnt go for obssessive fan girls who claim something they'll never get lol

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  14. i thinks its funny how this is a lemon and people are saying "he's so cute!" and all that stuff ha kinda funny anyway awsome lemon you rock!

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  15. i thought that wuz hot now i love naruto even more!! i <3 naruto

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  16. Sai was wrong for saying that !!!!!

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  17. It was cute but I already have kiba!

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  18. NARUTO???!!!! I want Sasuke!!!!!!!!and neji!!!!!!!!

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    1. sasgay is a jerk to naruto!!!! how could you like that son of a bitch

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  19. P.S Why does everyone like Deidara so much? I used to like him too. But now I have Neji and sasuke!!!

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  20. Oh, Naruto. He's so stupid yet so hot and sexy. Oo la la !

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  21. eww sasuke...but deidara..thats a man.../woman looking thing O.o

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  22. i like the story but i stil like gaara-kun!!

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  23. deidara is cool but i love sasori!! awesome lemon!!! i read these all the time lolz!

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  24. I love Naruto!!
    this was a little ew!
    but hey Ill make out with Naruto ANYDAY!!
    I could just NoM him!!
    Naruto is a shmexy beast!!

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  25. omg! i mean i love naruto with all my heart but damn! I WANT HIM EVEN MORE!

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  26. Why Sasuke and Gaara? When you can have...... LEE! Lmfao. Just kidding, or am I?

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  27. Naruto is a smexy smexy man. Yummy! Who needs emos anyway!? I call the hyper one!!!

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  28. Naruto forever! I mean who wouldn't want a fun, HOT blonde around? I would, rather than a sulking, boring Duck-ass!!! ;s

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  29. Hahaha well hey atleast we got to know it was him in the end... well Akira did. Us girls choose to read this so when knew who we had ^_~

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  30. that was..wow. i didn't know it was naruto at first then i read the end i, oh my god, i was sooooo shocked!!! i need more info!

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  31. XD i guess people just find them sexy... i agree... but Gaara will always be my favorite... as you can see from the many Gaara stories I have ^///^

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  32. i would say my namw ebut i dont no waht kind of pervs could be on this but any awy that was awsome everytime i read things like this i fall more and more in love with naruto and shure he is a a bit of a nuckle head but that is what makes him naruto and he is brave when needed and he can joke about anything my god why cant real men like that be here

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  33. I would love to have sex with Akauri it would be so much fun and it would feel so good and i would be so happy to be Naruto's place in the story

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  34. I REgret saying that earlyeir i take it back i was not thinking strait

    "Anonymous said...

    I would love to have sex with Akauri it would be so much fun and it would feel so good and i would be so happy to be Naruto's place in the story
    June 12, 2010 6:58 PM"

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  35. that was quite nice. youre a really good writer. Gaara happends to be my favorite, too. So if you write more of his stories, i just might start worshiping you! hahah <3

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  36. make more minutes in heaven.

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  37. my naruto he is mine, come near him and i will kill you with a sporke will not the wrighter

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  38. That was so romantic pls. make more

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  39. Can you make one for tobi? You don't have to make it M rated so it can be posted on Quizilla, but I like my Tobi-chan! Tobi is a good boy!^^

    Awesome lemon writing! I know full well that I couldn't write anything like THAT! Who know Naruto had it in him! XD

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  40. First: NaruHina forever. :)
    Second: Why would a person make out with someone without knowing who that someone is?
    Third: What is with Sai's obbsession with Naruto's thing?
    Last: Please make one about Shino. There are a lot of Shino fangirls out there who love your writing but are so dissapointed that they can't read about the cool, mysterious, and sensitive (not to mention sexy) bug-boy.

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  41. naruto is so cute!!!! i love your work

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  42. can you make one with kabuto plz?all of these are great but kabuto is missing!D8
    keep up the great work!!!
    kyuubichild

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  43. That was great! How old are they in this?

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  44. XD XD XD OMG!!! LMFAO SAI!!!! "Looks like he isnt dickless after all!" ROLF!!!! UR AWESOME AT THESE!!!! KEEP GOING!!!!

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  45. but Naruto is just my friend.........

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  46. Omg, this was so cute ^.^

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  47. me again at that piont in time i read them all 30 times





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    ( I would love to have sex with Akauri it would be so much fun and it would feel so good and i would be so happy to be Naruto's place in the story
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    I REgret saying that earlyeir i take it back i was not thinking strait)

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  48. omg this is really hot i mmean i already loved naruto more than enyone else but omg ive never qiute reed a story like this one but i must say encore more i say more hahaha

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  49. OMG!!!I wish i could be her!! I like naruto so much!!He is so hot!! And he totally has a dick!!sai!!I wold lick his freaking balls if i could!!

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  50. i love your stories!!! you need to write more! please!

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  51. i would totally have sex with naruto! He is such a hot sexy guy and it would be fun teasing him. U know wat i mean........

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  52. Naruto + Horny = he's mine!

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  53. This made me like Naruto even more... but I still love Sasuke and Gaara. They're both H.O.T, and strong!!!!

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  54. *BLUSH*I really wish i could just go through the screen and marry Naruto already! UGH!!!!

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  55. all of you can have Naruto... Gaara is MIIINNNNEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!

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  56. Write more of naruto ive never found one as good as this one even though i have read this one before i still like it

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  57. Why does everyone lik sasuke and neji? Lee, chouji, and shino r the best!

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  58. AWWW Its so cute but im with Tobi-kun

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  59. You can have Naruto Gaara is mine! *Hugs Gaara* My Panda-kun!

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  60. Naruto is mine and only mine, beware! Whoever lays hands on him is doomed. Lovely lemon btw! :)

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  61. i luv naruto he is so HOT!!!

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  62. I hate this. I can only dream about this stuff -.-"

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  63. okay that was amazing exept the finger leaked part

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  64. Me:*repeatedly hitting Sai over the head* BAD SAI! BAD SAI! BAAAADD SAAAII!!!!
    Naru-kun:=^.^=

    i love so many characters but my favorites are: naruto(duh!),Dei-kun(what!?!?! he has mouths on his hands!!! lol,great s*x),sasuke(HAHA, SAS-GAY! HAHAHAHAHAHA!),garra(i'm not afraid)
    RANDOM FACT: my very first sex dream was about naruto, weird right?!?!?!?

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  65. Naruto is hot hot HOT!! Damn!! Awesome lemon :P

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  66. I love this lemon please make more lemons
    ~Ashurii~

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  67. Omg T~T -nosebleed- I loved this and the Sai one! I'm writing a Sai fanfic,it's on my blog. You should have a look ^^

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  68. dickless lol. I don't really like naruto lemons though. he's to hyper and stuff. ( I'm NOT a Sasuke fangirl!! i just like Sasuke a little bit even though he is a jerk for going to Orochimaru!!) -Izzy

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  69. WOW if i did not know who it was i would tell that person get off but the who wrote this story you did very good.

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  70. Naruto is sooooo hot!!!
    (this has nothing to do with the story) Sometimes when I watch Naruto Shippuden I just want to jump in there and give him a hug when he's sad XD <3 <3 <3 <3 X)

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  71. i already have kiba:P

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  72. I love it! You have just inspired me to write another Lemon and to follow you :) you're such a good writer!

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  73. Ya'll can have Naruto-kun. I have my Kankuro-kun! He's my favorite perv!

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  74. Naruto You are soooooooooooooooooooo awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I luv you!!!!!!!!! The dudes Sexy ;3

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  75. I never thought of Naruto in that way before... I certainly am now.

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  76. PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEEEEASE WRITE MORE :D PLEEEASE

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  77. >:D DEIDARA IS MINE BICHES!!!

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  78. Okay you crazy rabid fangirls stop claiming someone who isn't real. I'm a Deidara fan as well but get real. The way you are behaving would make Deidara blow you up. Okay? You get that, good. God you all act like Tobi on acid for god's sake.

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  79. Jesus christ... BRAVO!!! Love your Naruto Uzumaki <3

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  80. My faves are sasuke gaara and deidara i think they are smexy but i loved the story it would be perfect for my sister to read :D

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