Friday, April 17, 2009

7minutes in Heaven with Sai (lemon)

You stepped into the dark closet and walked forward and closed the door and waited. You sighed. You couldn’t believe you were actually doing this. The door opened and the in the light you saw Sai. Your eyes widened and a blush crept it’s way to your cheeks.

Your thoughts: ‘They sent Sai in here!?’ of all the people, they chose the one guy you have a mage crush on. How could they?! This was on purpose! Before closing the door he turned on the light, eyes flickering to you, and then finished stepping in and closed the door. You looked at him in the light, he looked back. Eyes blank and unreadable as always. He blinked.

Sai: “I’m not quite sure what to do.”

You: “What do you mean?”

Sai: “They told me to go in here, to play what I believe was 7 minutes in heaven. I’m in, but I don’t know how to play. Can you teach me?”

You: “Well…” you looked down blushing “There’s not much to this game… All you do is spent 7 minutes in the closet with someone…”

Sai stepped forward: “What are we supposed to do in those 7 minutes?”

You shrugged: “Whatever you want… I guess…”

Sai took another step: “Dickless said something about foreplay…” he paused “I read something about it. Where you kiss and hug and such. A sexual simulation?”

You: “We don’t have to do that… If you don’t want to…” He took more steps forward till he was right in front of you, his height a little intimidating. He raised his hand and choked your cheek tucking a strand of your hair behind your ear causing to you to look up at him blushing more.

Sai: “But… I do what to…” you gasped a little, feeling slight relief that he was showing an interest in you. Sai’s eyes showed more then they usually do but then they were a little sad. He shook his head putting down his hand and stepping back looking down.

Sai: “I’m sorry… Are my actions inappropriate?” you shook your head stepping forward, closing most of the distance between your bodies and looked up at him.

You: “I want to…Too…” you then blushed and looked the ground again as his expression became suddenly surprised. This is the most you’ve seen his expression change at one time.

Sai: “Can show you me…?” his hand gently cupped your chin making you look up at me “teach me?” you nodded and slowly took his other hand into your and put it on your waist. He looked at you questionably.

You: “It’s ok to touch…” he nodded and wrapped that hand around your waist and began shyly rubbing your hips slowly. You wrapped your arms around his neck and encouraged him to go further by his other hand making it’s way down to neck to your collar bone where he traced it and the first hand was now on your back rubbing up and down and he gently pulled you to him. He breathed in your sent lightly as he nuzzled the side of your head with his face. You giggled and little nodded making him know you enjoyed that and he did it again. His hand began carefully traveling over you body. Over your back, and in your hair. You took in a breath when you felt his lips open over your ear and he kissed the shell making you shiver feeling his hot breath.

Sai immediately stopped: “Was that wrong?” You shook your head and he sighed in small relief and did it again then licked. You moaned in slight pleasure. Sai took that as a good sing and did that again. Kisses traveled from your ear, to your jaw, down you to neck and then you caller bone then back up to your neck. You heard him mumbling against your skin.

Sai: “…Want to…” more kisses up your neck “…Kiss you…” he licked on occasion and found his way back up your jaw and hen your chin “Like this?” he hovered over them, looking into your eyes, his were certainly unsure. You just nodded and smile a little and he landed his inexperienced lips on yours. It was also your first kiss, but you knew far more then he did on these types of situations because of your friends. You took the lead, kissing against him, making the kiss more passionate and ran your hands down his chest to his hips then back up against and rested them on his firmly muscled chest. Sai groaned into the kiss and just barely made his tongue graze your lips. You opened your mouth letting him discover so many new places and danced your tongue against his. Sai moved his hands over your stomach and upward halting just before he got to your breast. He broke the kiss and looked at you as if asking if this was ok. You nodded and he touched your soft mounds causing you to moan and arch your back into his touch. He didn’t squeeze, only caress in a respectful manner then came to the buttons on your shirt shooting you another glance and you nodded and he smiled and began unbuttoning them. Once they were all done, he gazed upon them, almost in a trance and blushed slightly before coming forward a little and his thumb flicked your sensitive nipple. You gasped and trembled.

Sai took his hands off you: “I’m sorry…” You shook your head: “It’s ok… I liked it…” you took his hand and put it back on your breast and moan rubbing it against you. Sai blushed more and you felt something hard against your stomach. You looked down seeing his clothed erection pressed against you.

Sai: “Sorry… I don’t mean to-“ you cut him off by kissing him.

You: “It’s ok, that’s supposed to happen” your hand went down his chest, passing by his open abs, and unzipped his pants, pulling his pants and boxers down a little, pulling out his throbbing member. Sai groaned and turned pink closing his eyes as your hands ran up and down him. You sank down and placed his length in your mouth causing him to gasp and buck uncontrollably at the feel. You held his hips still and he eventually calmed and grabbed your hair gently and you bobbed back and forth making moan as your tongue flicked hit tip more then a few times.

Sai panted: “Akauri… I-I can’t… I don’t… I’m going to…” you looked up at him, his eyes closed tightly, as if he was in pain, blushing furiously.

You nodded: “It’s ok” he looked at you for a brief minute, then you started up again and his eyes went back closed as he groaned and began pumping and you were practically drowned in his cum. You swallowed it all and licked his tip clean then leaned back looking at Sai. His eyes were wide. You just smiled and licked your lips causing him to get immediately hard again. There was a knock on the door.

Naruto: “Times up!”

Sai sighed: “We’ll be out in a minute Dickless.”

Naruto: “Don’t call me Dickless!” He went on and you and Sai put back on your clothes.

Sai looked at you: “I …don’t want stop.” You smiled: “We don’t have to” he took you by the hand and you two went back to his place to finish what you had started.

73 comments:

  1. wow
    that was really good!

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  2. Wow that was good but crazy but in a great way!!!!

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  3. wow that was hot!!!!!!!!!!!! I kept reading it over and over!!!

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  4. Sai's lack of emotion just makes it that more interesting..and more funny really...

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  5. aww! the way sai was acting was so cute! loved it.

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  6. awwwww i adore sai!!! hez soo clueless!! u just wanna kiss him and corrput his innocence ;)

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  7. thanks! heh, i had to read some Sai lemons to better prepare myself with his character cause i really don't know too much about him. i pretty much do that with evertthing i write. i called "research" hehe

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    1. "Research" we are all jirya's in some way shape or form when we read/write about this. But hey, Make-out Paradise kicks ass man. I would love to get my hands on a copy just to see what it's like. I mean just for the experience. I'm not a perv. *Inner me*:Bullshit you aren't!!!! Me:Shut up no ones supposed to know about that. I only did that once, and it was on a dare at that!! Ignore her folks she has no idea what she is talking about *Inner me*:You just keep telling yourself that sweetheart...

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  8. hahahahaha just like jeirya... oops i think i spelled dat rong

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  9. Aww... so cute :3 I love innocent stories like this, it makes it better in my opinion. When they act all innocent, it makes it more enjoyable x3 and I love all of your stories espesially this one =)

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  10. thanks! yeah, i try to write in different styles from time to time, some times it'll be ruff and other times it'll be gentile

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  11. awwww, sai ish sooo kaawwwaaiiiii, the way he is clueles and always apologising is so cute =3

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  12. i have a friend thatis totally in love with sai ^.~ would it be ok if i told her about this lemon ?she would go crazey if i did ^.^

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  13. Sai claims not to have any emotions and so he feels nothing but Danzo forgot one important thing. All men have needs.

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  14. ...Wow. That was awesome! ^////^ And it's even cooler because I love Sai!

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  15. I LOVE IT AND SAI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!=]1

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  16. me and my friend who is a sai fangirl read your story lets just say i wont be sitting in the chair anymore

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  17. Awwes so cute x3
    innocent lil' Sai xD

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  18. i love your work soooooooooooooooooo much!you rock!

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  19. thank you! please, tell your friends

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  20. ROFLMAO " We'll be out in a minute, Dickless!"
    "Dont call me Dickless!" XD too funny this was great :D

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  21. i know that was a laugh out loud moment but i didn't i just held it in

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  22. omg that was sooooo cuutttteee and majorly hot as well! sai's so polite it's adorable! ^.^

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  23. Sai is kind of a creep sometimes but it's funny to read about him in situations like this where he is trying to understand what's happening. I think you did a great job capturing his presonality.
    On a sub-note, WHAT'S WITH THE HALF-SHIRT? We all get it, he's in good shape, he can at least try to be subtle like Shino or Kiba or Naruto who all where jackets! Also, what is with Sai's obbsession with Naruto's thing?

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  24. Why did you post after Nejis for someone to respond to this? About the subnote, I like the half shirt It's hot. Of course subtle is good when they take off the jaket and it's like hello muscles O//O. I also would like to know what's up with sai and narutos thing.

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  25. Awwww!!!!Sai learned something new! And i loved it! X3

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  26. Wow!!! That was brilliant 100/7 LOL!! I really wished you continued lol!!

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  27. That was good. love these sex and blow job scenes!! keep writing these man i love them. you should write one for asuma i play with him on this naruto game and he's really deadly i wanna know how crazy you'll make him about sex. jk.

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  28. OMG!!! I luv how Sai was so unsure about that!! It was sooo cute!!! And lolz!!! Ur awesome at these!! And lolz again! Im like, wet right now!!!! XD jk...O wait, I actually am....O.O lolz XD

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  29. I'm commenting again i've never really liked Sai that much and it was kinda sweet how he didn't want to hurt the girl at all but i guess i like it more when the guys a little greedy for the girl.

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  30. my laptop is bieng held up by my dick search pokemon seven min in heaven

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  31. I thought sai was gay because he tried to kiss naruto

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  32. Can I. . .have your autograph!?

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  33. I'm a sai lover and this was so hot that I actually felt like it was happening to me! Keep up the good work!

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  34. that was so AWESOME loved it :) good work

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  35. I wonder what Lee would do in this kind of situation? Probably nosebleed and faint XD

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  36. *nosebleed* Wow! I really like this one

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  37. wow awesome job but i think you should include what happens after that ;)

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  38. sai got up to third base in seven minutes. please include what happens next ^^.please.thx

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  39. I read that like over 100 times already XD

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  40. love the lemons!! i wish people would make more Madara/Tobi ones though. I love Gaara, Sasuke, Itachi, and Madara!!

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  41. wow i read that over2 times and got sick

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  42. aww sai is so cute how he's always apologizing :)

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  43. i bet sai isgoing to do alot of 'research' about this to perfect this

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  44. Omg this is sooooooooooo awesome make more plz :3 tee-hee! i just love Sai ^.~

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  45. hahahahahahahahah! that was amazing ime somone famous for guess who i am.

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  46. Aww! Sai is so kawaii! I luv how he's so clueless about people situations. Oh, and for ppl who don't know this, Sai calls Naruto "Dickless" as a nickname. He read in a ppl skills book that calling people by a nickname is a way to express friendship...something along those lines... XD

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  47. OMG I LLLLOOOOOVVVVVEEEE SAI HES SOOOO CUTE YOU DID REALLY GOOD ON ALL OF YOUR LEMONS...
    that sounded really wrong >.<

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  48. so cute X3 X3 X3

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  49. it was sooo sexy!!!!!!

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  50. I swear that was longer then 7 minutes...

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  51. Love love loveee <3 think you could make a Kakashi one? PLEASEEEE :3

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  52. so sweet and inoccent xxxx I love guys that are inocent because there different and unique

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  53. go sai-sama
    oh my gowd one of my favorite character is so howt
    hot
    hot

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  54. I has fainted by nosebleed

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  55. Awh Sai is so cute cx

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  56. e..e my words ' hubaaaa--fuuuu dshudhifn- ' nose bled and giggles.

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  57. Haha dickless I never knew Naruto was dickless

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  58. Damn, I want a continuance...this is so like Sai...to be so hesitant, and a little clueless when it comes to things like this...I LOVE IT!!!!

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