Friday, April 17, 2009

7minutes in Heaven with Sasuke (lemon)

You: "Say what?!"

Naruto: "Now Akauri, don't be shy, go get him!"

You: "You people drag me from my home and bring me here so you can lock me in a closet!?"

Kiba: "Yup!" they 'helped' you get up and pulled you over to the door.

You: "What if a rapist is in there?!"

Naruto: "I can assure you, there's not a rapist in there"

Kiba: "Actually, we don't know that Naruto, he could very well be a rapist"

Naruto thought for a minute: "True, but I don't think he is, so you're probably safe"

You: "I'll remember this! You think I'll forget, but I will so remember!"

Kiba: "Whatever." They made sure you were in the closet before locking the door and huffed and crossed your arms glaring into the darkness.

You: "I'm warning you, if you even try to rape me, I'll kill you."

Voice: "I'm not going to rape you. I'm just as annoyed." You knew that voice… It belonged to the very attractive Uchiha. Sasuke.

You: "Sasuke?"

Sasuke: "Yeah, it's me Akauri"

Your eye twitched: "I know."

Sasuke: "Don't start."

You: "Start what?" you asked quite cutely.

Sasuke: "That, don't start that." You giggled.

You: "I don't know what you're talking about"

Sasuke: "Why do you do this?"

You giggled again: "It’s fun." You walked forward reaching your arms out feeling anything that came into reach. Lucky for you, bad for Sasuke, you ‘accidentally’ grabbed something in his pants.

Sasuke growled: "Watch it." He pulled your hand away and held it in the air.

You pouted: "I'm sorry, it's dark, protect me, I'm scare." You hugged him nuzzling your face into his chest.

Sasuke: "Get off." He pulled you away holding both your hands in the air. You felt kinda weird with your chest being so open in front of him, even with your shirt on.

You: "No. I've always wanted to do this."

Sasuke: "What-" you cut him off by kissing him. You smiled a little into the kiss blushing. He surprisingly kissed back. But it was sloppy. When you both pulled he spoke.

Sasuke: "You're perverted."

You: "and you're sexy" he kissed you that time letting go of one of your hands and holding your chin up helping him to get a better angle because you were so short compared to him. You turned tomato red opened your lips hoping for him to slip his tongue in. You knew Sasuke knew you liked him, it was only a matter of time till he started liking you back. He smirked into the kiss realizing what you were waiting and for teased you buy sticking his tongue in and out of your mouth making you crave more of him. You moaned little on the angry side and he stopped letting the both of you taste one another. You savored the flavor of his mouth. You wiggled out of his hold to kiss down his jaw and to his neck. Sasuke moaned a little letting his hands trickle down your side slightly tickling you. You giggled and slipped a hand up his shirt feeling his muscular chest. He rested his hands on your waist while you lifted his shirt over his head.

Sasuke: “What are you planning?” you giggled and licked his neck up and down.

You: “I want you” you looked up at him giving him an adorable smile but knowing he couldn’t see it, you just rubbed your face against his smiling.

Sasuke chuckled: “You’re too cute.”

You shook your head: “I’m just cute enough for you” before he could respond you wanted to see just how far he would let you go in this closet, so you rubbed your hand against his lap. Sasuke growled and unintentionally bucked into your hand. You smirked feeling him harden a little.

Sasuke: “Akauri…?” he asked you in a slightly amused tone. You poked him in the belly button.

You: “Yes….?” You matched his amusement rubbing against his growing hardness. His answer was a moan as his hands went to your chest squeezing your chest. You moaned this time and got on your tip toes to kiss him. Sasuke kissed back firmly not stopping rubbing your breast and now the other hand was on you bottom rubbing up and down occasionally squeezing. While this was distracting him you began un-zipping pants. Once the zipper was down you pulled out his engorged length. Sasuke slightly shivered as your warm hands pulled him out into the cold closet. You started to gently rub your thumb along a side of him and Sasuke groaned bucking into your hand. You then switched to his tip and swirled your finger in circular motions. Sasuke broke the kiss panting and squirming. He was rock hard about now.

Sasuke: “…A-Akauri….” He moaned and began kissing you again. You wrapped your fingers around him and began pumping. His moans became louder and his kisses got sloppier as he lost his senses. You felt victory as you saw how much power you had over him. You broke the kiss and kissed your way to down his chest, to his perfect ads, then to his pelvis. You then licked his lower self. Sasuke gasped and twitched.

Sasuke: “Akauri!” you engulfed his solid manhood taking in as much of him as you could. Sasuke growled and grabbed your hair trying to not pull. You tongue did unspeakable things to him as he began throbbing and pumping in and out of your mouth. It didn’t take very long before you got the better of him. You pulled back a little and licked his slit driving him crazy causing him to growl and buck his hips. You did this over, and over, and over, and over, and over, and over- He groaned loudly and came pumping till he was all down your throat. It tasted rather a little… Like nothing you’ve never tasted before… Not horrible. Once it was all gone down into you, you opened your eyes to see Sasuke. Wait. How were you seeing him in the this dark closet? He looked horrified as his face was complete red as he starred in front of him over you. You turned your head around to the closet door opened and a room whole of familiar faced looking stunned. You turned red as well and Sasuke quickly zipped up his pants.

Naruto: “Uh… I’m just gonna close this now…” He shut the door and you two didn’t say anything for a whole minute. Then you busted out laughing.

Sasuke: “What’s so funny?” you could tell he was glaring at you.

You: “What just happened!”

Sasuke: “You don’t care that they’ll think you’re a slut?” you stood up and shook your head kissing him again.

You: “No, they won’t say that as long as I’m only doing that to you.” He smiled against your face and kissed you again.

118 comments:

  1. lol dey got caught ?!!!da las part was funny wn naruto sed um im just gonna close this now

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  2. Wow............. "I'm gonna close this now". Damn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  3. LOL LOOOOOOOVOOVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEE ITTTTTTT

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  4. I like how he said “Uh… I’m just gonna close this now…” ROTFL ~ ^.^ XD

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  5. I liked it when Sasuke didn't want to have sex with the girl but got into it anyway

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  6. Mmmm.....Yummy!!!!

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  7. OMG!!! sexy haven't read anything like it before! I love it write more sasuke ones!please!

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  8. hahaha that was funny when naruto said uh..im just gonna close this now..!!!! XD

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  9. thanks all! yeah i think i might

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  10. write more Sasuke lemons and some that r soooooo lemony that people will love it and read it over and over again

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  11. wow....that was absolutely my fav all that ive ever read XD

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  12. that was so good and funny

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  13. thanks a lot! i think i will! ^-^

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  14. do you do one shots? just wondering...haha.
    ( kaikahana@hotmail.com )

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  15. okay ^_^
    ( ps this is the same girl that asked btw lmao )

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  16. I love how Akauri was the one doing all the teasing instead of Sasuke! xD

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  17. Thank god XD
    A Sauske lemon not written by some noob XD

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  18. your stories are the absolute best i have ever read, i love all of them, even the ones with the guys i don't like.

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  19. LOL THAT WAS FUNNY WELL...I LUV UR STORIES LIKE 4 REEL BUT CAN U MAKE A TOBI ONE FOR ME PLEASE??

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  20. thanks so much you guys! and i might do a tobi one...

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    1. You have to do a Tobi one >:3

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  21. OOMMMGGG THAT WOZ SOO GOOD. U R SO GOOD AT RITIN THESE I CAN IMAGIN IT SO CLEARLY. (AKWARD -_<) BUT ANYWAYZ WRITE MOR PLz, yo iluv yur deidara + itachi lemonz 2 they were also soooo goood. these are some of the best lemonz ive read. if it was posible i would have a major nose bleed rite now. Lol ^_x

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  22. XD thanks so much! im glad you think that, means a lot!

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  23. haha! busted!

    "Uhh....I'm just gonna close this now..." xD

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  24. hahah funny but HOT

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  25. Loved it... yum...

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  26. ... i dont think i hate sasuke any more...

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  27. I JUST LOVED THAT PART WHEN THEY GOT CAUGHT!IT WAS SO FUNNY!!LOL!!!!DON'T GET ME STARTED ON THE WHOLE RAPIST THING!!THAT WAS FUNNY,TOO!!! YOU SHOULD KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!:]

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  28. please do a tobi one please!!!!

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  29. I agree Tobi/Madara would make a great story...a very sexii one at that!!

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  30. OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH MYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY GOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDD!!!!

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  31. "Im just gonna close this now"
    OMG gold! lmao

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  32. THAT WAS TO COOL. SUPPER FUNNY. I LOVED ITED.

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  33. "I'm just gonna close this now" Super funny.

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  34. OH MAN!!!! i WISH THAT WAS ME WITH SASUKE!!! BUT WAS SHE SUCKING ON HIS DICK?????

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  35. "I'm gonna close this now" Priceless.
    Gawd. That was sexy.

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  36. it was funny at the begining and the end and smexy in the middel... DONT TELL ITACHIIIII!!!!

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  37. LOL i loved this the last part was funny "i am just gonna close this now." LOLLLL

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  38. naruto ruins everything

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  39. hehe. now that wuz funny and cute.of corse in my head i replacd the name with my character Sayuri.catchy huh?

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  40. I've always hated Sasuke, BUT..reading this made me hate him a bit LESS..x3 he's shmexy

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  41. LoL! That was so good! So much better that all those other lemons!XD Also this lemon is awesome because it tells us what it is rated unlike others!

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  42. hahaha they got busted this was a good one

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  43. Aww i REALLy love sasuke and itachi can u PLEASE make MORE!!!!!

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  44. I would like for you to do one on Hidan and Tobi

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  45. You should create a series from this for sasuke :) your an awesome author

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  46. thanks, and i was thinking about making a part two this with other characters, this time i was just focused on the most popular, i just need to find out who the public wants to the most

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    1. C-Can you do Suigetsu...? I w-would appreciate it ^^"

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  47. that was a shitload of funny plz plz make more

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  48. it was funny cuz sasuke was annoyed and akauri kept on, but he knew he liked it. xDDDDD Make more like this plzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!! so funny!!!!!!!!!!!

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  49. SASUKE IS A TRAITOR. DEATH TO HIM AND HIS FANGIRLS.

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  50. sasuke is mine! but you did a good job. it was funny that they got caught. :D

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  51. lol!!it ws SOO funny when naruto said im gna close it!!hahahaha!mAn,embarassing!!:)

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  52. .... Uh, weird but still quite funny.....

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  53. Omy f-in gawd they got cought!!!!! LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

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  54. I'm going to close the door and walk away now. that story is kinda weird...........

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  55. Wow... I hate Sasuke's guts.. BUT I LOVE IT!!!

    P.S. "Uh...I'm just gonna close this now...":3

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  56. OMG OMG!!! Wow! I used to hate these kinds of quizzes because a bunch of noobs wrote the ones I read, But you did an awesome job!! Keep going!!

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  57. wow i feel sorry for naruto. i think hes scared for life now so im going to close the door and walk away and never come back

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  58. omg the naruto part was so funny "um i'm just going to close this noe." lol i lamo'd all night.

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  59. That was so awesome. i like sasuke a lot but in a different way then the fangirls i'm not a crazed sex girl. anyay, u should write one when sasuke realizes how much he wants the girl and he gets into it first.

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  60. Okay, I still don't like Sasuke... But I love Naruto now. "Um... I'm just gonna close this now." That sounds just like me.

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  61. haha that was so funny! and the same with me, i like it more when the guy falls for the girl (hard,srry just had to say that) but the story was really awesome!!

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  62. I have but two requests!! One please can u visit my own lemon blog me wud feel honored if u wud read some of my work!! And two it wud b nice if u wud make me a Madara Uchiha lemon!! hmhm me find him a bit yummy!! Not as much as Dei Dei but u already made one of tose so me ask for tis one hmhm tank u!

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  63. i think you should make a pain lemon :)

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  64. I love it, its awesome to see a Sasuke lemon when Sasuke isn't the fully dominant one. I like it he was submissive for once!

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  65. GAWED! I always hated saskes Meanness but this has changed my mind. MAKE MORE PLEASE!

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  66. that was awesome i loved it ur very good at writing thoose :)

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  67. I loved it! You are most definitely my favorite writer. Your stuff is amazing! :)

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  68. I have to say that my favorite part had to be when they got caought,and this was funny yet cute at the same time.Good job!!!!!

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  69. THIS IS THE BOMB HAHAHA WONDERFUL. YOUR SO GOOD AT THIS

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  70. i wish this really happend to me

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  71. HAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!! XD I love it even after reading it for the 10th time! XD

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  72. OMFG THAT WAS GREEAATTT<333

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  73. victory!!!ahahahahah that was really funny

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  74. ........HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! T-THE THING ABOUT, "your preverted" "your sexy", A-AND THE-THE, HAHAHAHAHAHA, "I'm gonna close this now" SOOOOOOOO FUNNY!!!!!!! HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AGAIN, naruto-kun is soooooo cute!
    Naruto: =^.^=

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  75. Dude said, I'm just gonn close this now.

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  76. I Read this over 20 times :D... Is that bad? O.o

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  77. Me: *reads lemon* O.O
    Naruto: Vi-chan? whats wrong?
    Me: *points to computer*
    Naruto: *reads* O.O
    Sasuke: ... whats the matter baka?
    Naruto:O.O
    Me:*nose starts bleeding* *points to computer*
    Sasuke:*reads**looks over at me* whats wrong with you?
    Me: *looks over at Sasuke* you will *voice turns demonic* DIE!!!!!!!!
    Sasuke: O.O

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  78. Naruto: “Uh… I’m just gonna close this now…”
    That killed me xD

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  79. lol. yuor the best lemon witer EVERRRR!! plz make one wit hidan! PLEEZZZZZZZZZ!!!

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  80. lol...... it was just like, i just saw something i never wanted to see

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  81. LOL :D i like the i'm just gonna close this now part

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  82. THAT WAS BRILLIANT!!!

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  83. lol im just going ti close this now hahahaha
    i read 10 times

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  84. lol the last part was super super funny
    im just going to close this now
    i cant believe they cot caught

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  85. i think i've read all the sasuke lemons on the internet. O.o People need to make more forced ones. There are way to many where they make out with him and THEN he decides to go along with it.

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  86. i don't get why people say that they would lick a guys dick... THAT'S JUST NASTY!!! I would never do that.

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  87. Yeah let the women take over it was a little gross though but you did do a good job.

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  88. I agree with the one who said do a tobi one. I <3 Tobi, even before he was badass.

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  89. It was ok... something must be wrong with me but i LOVE forced lemons much better. I like it when the guy starts out kissing the girl and she is shy and doesn't know what to do. I LOVE almost all ur lemons though!

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  90. LOL hella hawt please make another but with naruto and maybe one more with either kiba or shikamaru.

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  91. I honestly thought I wasn't going to like this one because I don't like Sasuke, but this one is my favorite out of them all.. the only one that matches up is the Sasori one.

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  92. BUSTEDDD!!! LMAOO :D

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  93. Woah got busted LMFAO!!!!!! "um Im gonna close this now....." LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL XDDDDDDDDD make more this is like one of the best lemon writers in tha world all hail them!!!!! write mor plz with a cherry on top? :3

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  94. If they hadn't been interupted I can so see Sasuke fucking her, lol.

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  95. ouff why did they interupted us! but infront of that! nice story i liked it ^_^

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  96. LMAO!!!!!! i would of be disapointed to if i was interupted but then again i got a laugh out of it :P awesome lemon!!!!

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  97. PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEEEASE WRITE MORE PLEASE :-3
    :D

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  98. She can't hide how much she liked it. Write more Please!!

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  99. I love all of your stories I've read all of them

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  100. i loved your story.. i read all of them and i think your really great at writing lemons, :3

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  101. THAT WAS SO FUDGING HILARIOUSE PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!

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  102. Hmmmmmm I love this sasuke ������

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  103. hey i should be the first to have sex with sasori-sama!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  104. That was sooooo hot ! I liked dit ! Van you do one with Suigetsu please !

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  105. Naruto : I'm juste gonna close this nos !
    It was so hilarious !!!!!

    Yeaaaaah !!!! I think Suigetsu-kun is hot ! C-can you do one with hum please !!!!! ^////^
    I will be so happy if you do that !!! (I'm french, si sorry fort m'y bas english !)

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  106. I like how reader-chan is all straight up "I want chu" and I'm like "TAKE ME OR DIE!" XD

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