You: “Where are you taking me?” you reached out into the air in front of you, you couldn’t see.
Tobi: “Tobi can’t tell you that, Tobi made a promise.”
You: “But Tobi!” he continued to push you forward and soon you heard a door open and close. You reached around and finally took off the blind fold that had blinked you seconds before.
You called: “Tobi? Where are you?” all you saw was darkness. Even though your eyes were opened and the blind fold was off. You stepped further into the darkness and reached out feeling something soft and warm. You stepped closer to it letting your hands trail up and down. It was almost moving from what you could tell, but it was also still. Almost like breathing.
You: “Hello?” you stepped even closer still feeling trying to figure out what this was. You applied more pressure to your hands as they trailed farther down and a little farther up.
Voice: “God, I’m so horny right now…” you gasped and stepped back.
You: “Whose there?!”
Voice: “Guess who, un”
Your eyes widened: “Deidara-sama?!” you were feeling on Deidara?! Oh well this was just perfect; you got locked in the closet with your life long crush. And to make things worse he was now ‘horny’ thanks to you.
Deidara: “You guessed it” he pressed you against a wall and a hot blush rose to your cheeks in an instant.
You: “Wh-What are you d-doing?”
Deidara: “Playing seven minutes in heaven, un. This is how you play Akauri…” his lips went to your ear slightly nibbling on the lobe. You shivered as his breath ran down your spine.
You: “B-But we can’t… “One of his hands went around your waist as another rested on your breast. You unconsciously moaned.
Deidara: “On yes we can” he kissed your cheek, then your neck, then began licking you before he sucked plastering his mark pink on your flesh for the world to see. You shuttered as his mouth of on his left hand began biting, licking, and sucking on your now hard nipple threw your shirt. You blushed furiously as the one that was now licking up your thigh.
You whimpered: “D-Deidara-sama…” he pulled your shirt off leaving your top bare to his pleasure. You instinctively wrapped your arms around your chest embarrassed.
Deidara: “I can’t see you in he darkness anyway, there no point in that, un.” He removed your arms and one of his hands began rubbing all over you while his mouth sucked on a nipple. Let’s not forget the hand making its way into your panties.
You gasped: “Dei-kun!” the slimy tongue of his right hand licked along your dampening folds of your forbidden area. Deidara chuckled.
Deidara: “I like the sound of that, un. Let’s make that happen again…” The tongue was now interested into you. Of course you yelped his name again. Or at least the new abbreviation of his name. His other hand joined his mouth in sucking your nipples so now both your breast were covered and you couldn’t help but squirm and writhe under him a little. Before you knew it you were completely nude. You would have never imagined you’d end up nude, in a closet, with Deidara. How unlikely. How lucky. You lost control and listened to your urges and pushed Deidara against another wall kissing him back wholly. He was surprised at first, but then he smirked and kissed back resting his hands on your sides allowing you to have your way. You undid his cloak and it dropped to the floor and kept kissing him pressing your body closely against his getting on you toes. You felt his hard excitement press against your stomach as you played with his hand your hands ran down his chest to feel him. Deidara sighed deeply filled with pleasure and jolted his hips into your hand causing better friction between your hand and his manhood. He growled when he had had enough and pushed you to the ground pulled his pants down.
You giggled: “Don’t you think we’ve been in here little more then seven minutes?”
Deidara: “Like I care, I want you now, un” you felt hid tip press against your ready entrance. You moaned and then you were soon filled with him. You’d have to thank Tobi later.
Friday, April 17, 2009
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*thanks tobi* thumbs up ;D
ReplyDeleteohh thank youu ^0^
ReplyDeletedeidara is so damn sexy
^.^ Thanx Tobi! I Love you Dei-Dei! He is so sexy and smexy! But I mostly love him because he is like me, and I love art! ^.^ (But I also like him for his sexiness!)
ReplyDeleteI <3 art too!!!
DeleteI luv art too!!!
Deletelol, thanks all!
ReplyDeleteDiedara is so freaking sexy!!!!!!
DeleteFuck yea he's sexy
Deleteyou should make a tobi lemon
ReplyDeleteHoly S••t that was epicosity
DeleteYeah make a tobi lemon!!
ReplyDeleteok, i'll try my best!
ReplyDeleteahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
ReplyDeleteumm... is that a good thing?
ReplyDeleteGawd sex with Deidara must be so heavenly with those hands of his...*sigh*
ReplyDeleteOh god!! Don't say that! Because then I would want to know!!
Deleteall those tounges! yummy stuff!
ReplyDeleteughhh those hands.... pure bliss... hahaha ^_-
ReplyDeletemaan this lemon iss good XD i luv Dei-kun :3
ReplyDeletethanks! XD
ReplyDeleteTobi is a good boy XD
ReplyDeletethanks^^
why yes he is
ReplyDeleteWOOP WOOP smexi XD but dei-dei is awsome, with thows hands it must be pure bliss ^///^
ReplyDeletekool can u make me a madara/tobi lemon plz?
ReplyDeletei wander if tobi knew what would happen....
ReplyDeletesorry, im still not excepting anymore one shot requests
ReplyDeletei would thank tobi so much for that. i love deidara hez like awesome. you r so good at these plz write more
ReplyDeleteyummy yum sexy Dei-chan
ReplyDeletemmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
You mack that Akauri chick get off my Dei and mack sheir she alsoe stays off of Tobi and Sasori to.
ReplyDeleteP.S or else.
Hmm..you should of continued.........I was starting to stroke myself...and pretend that was me....
ReplyDeleteyou should make a tobi lemon , but thhis one aws awsome ! "god im so horny right now" XD
ReplyDeleteomg that was so f***ing smexy!!! I LOVE DEIDARA
ReplyDeleteI LOVE DEI-KUN EVEN MORE NOW!!!!I SAW YOUR OTHER COMENTS AND I REALLY THINK A TOBI LEMON WOULD KICK A**!!!!!:)
ReplyDelete(Emily)
ReplyDeletemack? sheir?
I need to take you to a grammar school ^^'
Btw, another awesome lemon, keep up the good work :D
UGH!! hIS HANDS ARE A BLESSING, UN???!!!!
ReplyDelete*wIshes it were real*
nice work
ReplyDelete*DROOL* lol
i love dei-kun ! gotta luv tobi about now
ReplyDeleteThat was awesome
ReplyDeleteMake a tobi lemon.Please
ReplyDeleteyes please make a Tobi lemon i absolutely love him
ReplyDeleteanyways awesome story you're very good at making lemons
xoxo
thanks! and i think i will make a tobi one
ReplyDeletetHANK TOBI!!1 YOU ROCK NARUANGIRL16!!
ReplyDelete"God, I'm so horny right now" lol if i was in that closet and heard that random statement...i think i would have start laughing lmao
ReplyDeletegood tobi! XD
ReplyDelete"God, I'm so horny right now." lol
ReplyDeleteLove it. :)
~ Tobi, you really are a good boy!
I love ya for this!Lemonz rock!
ReplyDeleteSooooo smexy
ReplyDeleteI LOVE YOU Dei-kun
Tobi rox to!
Finally i hate deidara lemons that dont mention the fact that he has 3/4 mouths/tongues
ReplyDeleteGREAT JOB! :D *thumbs up*
ReplyDeleteAWSUM STORY!!!
ReplyDeletecan u plzzzz make a kakashi lemon?
my gawd sex with deidara must be so heavenly with those hands of his...
ReplyDeleteMoans*
ReplyDeleteAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH DEI FASTER
That was so hot! Could you make a Hidan lemon, please? that'd be terrific!
ReplyDeleteHey Tobi thanks! Now can we get a lil action w/ u ^_~?
ReplyDeletewow this is the best story i read
ReplyDeleteme:thank u tobi;)
XD
ReplyDeleteTHANKS TOBI!!! U ROCK!!!
ReplyDeleteAwesome story man! it rox hard
ah, gotta love sexy Deidara...those hands of his are extremely useful...Tobi is a good boy!
ReplyDeleteOMG deidara is sooooooo sexy ..... got to love the hands Art is a BANG!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteOMG I LOVE DEIDARA SO MUCH THIS STORY WAS AWESOME!!
ReplyDeleteoooooe you should do one with Hidan!
ReplyDeleteWOW!!!
ReplyDeletei cant get over that
Deidara is the best!!!
How can you not like a guy with two hands and three Sexy mouths
MAKE ANOTHER!!!
THANK YOU Tobi
ReplyDeletei remmembered when i first saw him,the word"art" came in my head,i love drawing,and i also acomplish his art,i thought in that moment...we were really ment to be...
ReplyDeletei love it make a orochimaru one pretty pretty please
ReplyDeletethanks tobi! ^.^b
ReplyDeletedeidra is soo smexy
ReplyDeletedeidara is mine!
ReplyDeletei would also give my body to my dei-dei if this where the case!
ReplyDeleteTHANK YOU TOBI!!! :3
ReplyDeleteDeidara knows how to use those hand-mouths. ;) I still only agree with him on the point that explosions rock.
ReplyDeletelove this doujin so soo much. i was at home when i read this and my dad was very worried about me cuz i wasnt playing music. pezzz plezz plezzz make a pein one. that would be soo awesom and like i ssid my name is jordan kuelling (i have a myspace look me up if u want money for making these) .... ^//^
ReplyDeleteI loved it! Deidara is one of my faves! And can you please make a Tobi, Pein, Kabuto, and Hidan Lemon?
ReplyDeleteAll I'm gonna say is....whoa.
ReplyDeleteGOD DAMMIT DONT END IT THIS EARLY!!
ReplyDeleteDamn, with those extra mouthes of his, he must f*ck like a tiger...
ReplyDeleteOMG OMG!! THANK YOU SO MUCH TOBI!!! AND IM SOOO TURNED ON RIGHT NOW, ITS NOT EVEN FUNNY!!! DX XD lolz
ReplyDeleteTOBI YOU ROCK!
ReplyDeleteO.o OH. MY. GOSH.... THAT WAS FRICKIN AMAZING!!! I LOVE DEI DEI!! <33333333 SOOOOOOOOOOOO HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDelete*drools* 0/////0 uhhh nice work *drools*
ReplyDelete3 mouths id give my body to that
ReplyDelete''Yes we can!''
ReplyDeletethink you could make a lemon with kabuto? you make awesome naruto lemons XD
ReplyDeletethank you tobi :D
ReplyDeletewow i love deidara hes so fricken cute.
And good at art. *sigh* luuuurve him!
Nice one :D xx
Imagine what else those hands have done... ;P
ReplyDeleteOMF those hands of his are just O///O
ReplyDeleteMan you're torturing me by not continuing your stories T.T
BUt you're way good! Keep at it :3
AMAZING! Make a kankurou Thank you
ReplyDeletePlease make a tobi one i love tobi he is sooo cute.
ReplyDeleteomg that was f in AWESOME u no he has a mouth on his CHEST right? and comeon thats somethin special 2 work with....also pretty plz make a hidan story
ReplyDeleteOmg! Thank you so much, Tobi! :DDD
ReplyDeleteOMG I love Dei-kun. thats what i call heaven!
ReplyDeleteDeidara's like me. i love art, im smexy, (not like him though XD) and long blonde hair all the way :)
thanks tobi :)
Thanks Tobi XP.. i love deidara. These 7 minutes in heaven lemons are awesome
ReplyDeleteWow. That's all I can say. Just-wow. I loved that one, my favorite! Please make more! *makes puppy-dog eyes*
ReplyDeleteDie-Kun! He's My fave Akaksi. THANKIE TOBI-KUN!
ReplyDeleteMe: Thanks Tobi!
ReplyDeleteTobi: Your welcome ____-chan!
Me: Grin :D I love Deidara!!
Tobi:.... Tobi is a good boy!
Me: Yes you are Tobi!
Deidara: Tobi...
Tobi:Yes Deidara-sempai?
Deidara: *Blows Tobi up* Tobi... IS NOT A GOOD BOY!
Now he put those mouths to use. yeah!!!! :D
ReplyDeleteKakashi please?! *puppy dog eyes*
ReplyDeletehonestly you left out the best part
ReplyDeletei probably killed tobi at first, then after about five rounds with dei, i would hit tobi then hug him
ReplyDeleteHow unlikely. How lucky. That's some pretty damn good luck!
ReplyDeleteMmmm deidara is so fucking sexy :D it's funny before I even knew about naruto the way I view art is almost the same as deidara.. sigh *drools* you should make one of kisame *nose bleed*
ReplyDeleteDAY-UM! I think I just *nose bleed* -ed.
ReplyDeleteDeidara has got to be the freakin' sexiest Akatsuki member, in my opinion.
With those extra tongues....ohmaiGAWD, I can't even imagine *drooling*
*nose bleeds* I'm such a pervy little girl TT~TT I love senpai deeply, but I didn't know he was this rough, it kind of freaks me out 0_0
ReplyDeletewow
ReplyDeletehey loved the lemon make one of suigetsu if you dont have one ps DEIDARA-KUN IS MINE!!!
ReplyDeletelucky
ReplyDeleteOmg that was so f-ing awsome!!!! keep up the good work!! and please please please with a cherry on top make a Hidan lemon!!!! :P
ReplyDeletethat was soooo awsome!!! you should make one with tobi
ReplyDeleteI like Rock Lee better than any of the characters on here. I'm not crazy just for liking Lee.
ReplyDeletesakura:Yes you are.
namida:NO I'M NOT SAKURA!!!! GET OUT OF HERE!!!
lee:Namida, did you forget what you were going the ask this nice person?
namida:No Lee, I didn't. Can you make one for me and Lee.
sakura:Leave me out of this one.
namida:Put her in it anyway.
sakura:HEY!!!
JUST WHEN IT WAS GETTING GOOD IT ENDED D: Oh well.. Thank you, Tobi-kun!
ReplyDeleteDamn Tobi you sinful thing.
ReplyDeleteThank you Tobi-kun!!!!!!!! You made my day as a reward I give you cookie :3
ReplyDeleteMerci beaucoup, Tobi...(why i'm writing in french, I have no idea...) DEIDARA IS THE SEXIEST AKATSUKI MEMBER EVER!!!
ReplyDeleteWow!! I hadn't read this in ages. I feel do old now!! Lol. But, still love it. The good thing is, me and him are only one year apart. Lol. Yay!!~ •3•
ReplyDeleteW-wow<3 (Super mega blush) Deidara-Kun<3
ReplyDelete:D KYA THANK YOU TOBI-KUN! <33333 sorry to seem fangirly but i really loved this!
ReplyDeleteI rly loved it can u make one with pein?
ReplyDelete«god im so horny now» «whos there» «guess who un» «deidara» «you gessed it un» done wouldve fucked him right then and there
ReplyDelete~some lemons make lemonade
Tobi is a VERY good boy now!
ReplyDeleteoh my god akatsuki is so smexy hot i think im getting wet with these horny things
ReplyDeleteDeidara is so hot omf
ReplyDeleteI never thought it fair that he has mouths on his hands, Well wait that didn't come out exactly right... it is fair, but when you're trying to concentrate on pleasuring him and he's using all three mouths on you, it's kinda like damn it, give me a chance to work here. I mean he has both breasts and down below going all at the same time if he wants. And if you're trying to go after his cock...well ladies I think you get the picture...guys well, it's kinda hard to explain...
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