You nervously pleaded: "Come on you guys, this game is completely pointless, I don't see why-"
Sakura: "Or stop being sucha chicken!" she whispered "you knew you've wanted this since day one" you blushed.
Ino nodded: "Yeah, you want nothing more to be shoved in a closet for an hour with your beloved Gaara" you went redder.
You: "You said it was seven minutes!"
Sakura: "That depends on whether or not you're ready to get out…" she giggled.
Ino: "There are like ten closets in this house Akauri, if you and your sand man need more time we can use another one" you blushed even more.
You: "We're just friends…."
Sakura/Ino: "Whatever" they shoved you in the closet and locked the door. Leaving you inside with Gaara. Your lifetime crush. You felt awkward. You couldn’t see him, due to the dark factor, but you think that was him breathing. You stayed near the door, your back touching it, and slid down till you were in a seating position. You didn't do well in silence.
You: "…S-So…Umm… We don't have to do a-anything if you don't w-want to…" you silently cursed yourself for stuttering. Let's just be thanking God he couldn't see your blush. It was quiet for a while then you heard him speak.
Gaara: "Are you scared about being in here with me?"
You: "You know I-I'm not afraid of you…"
Gaara: "I know, but you seen nervous." He could read you like a book.
You: "It's j-just…."
Gaara: "Just what?" you blushed more biting your bottom lip not wanting to tell him about your feelings. "You can tell me." You gasped a little hearing how he was so close now. He whispered in such a sensual manner it made your heart race. He was maybe only inches away. He was hovering over you a little too.
Gaara: "You can tell me anything, Akauri…" his mouth was right next your ear. Your face went darker as you continued to fight the urge to kiss him. You put a hand on his chest and gripped his shirt feeling his warmth.
You: "Gaara I… I've always…" you couldn’t finish because of his tongue gliding across your lips sending shivers up and down your spine. He only did it twice but it was enough to almost make you go mad. To feel his tongue on your lips…
Gaara: "I've always liked you more then everyone else… I've felt this strong attachment to you…" what was he saying? He licked your top lip. Then you bottom lip, excruciatingly slow making heat shoot threw your being.
You whimpered: "Gaara…" he began sucking on your neck and you accidently moaned when one of Gaara's hand fell open on your bare thigh. He trailed it up ward till he was only an inch away from your most private spots. You squirmed a little under him feeling dizzy from the pleasure. Soon enough his lips fell on yours muffling any sound you both tried to make after that and he pinned you to the ground. His kiss involved his lips, his teeth, and his tongue. You kissed him trying to match his power but failing letting him have complete control.
You moaned: "G-Gaara...?" he stroked your face.
Gaara: "Shh...it’s ok..." you nodded, already knowing he would never hurt you and kissed him back wrapping your arms around his neck while he went back under your skirt beginning to rub against your womanhood. You began panting as your arousal pooled between your legs. Gaara used his other hand to start massaging your breast and unbuttoning your shirt. You felt cool air breeze against your chest that was now bare and then the warmth of Gaara's mouth over take your left nipple. You felt something harden against your inner thigh and blushed even more feeling Gaara press his clothed swollen member against you. Gaara’s mouth left your now cold nipple and repeated on the next then kissed your lips then broke it breathing heavily.
Gaara: "I want you so much... Please don't deny me..."
You: "I want you too... I'm not going to deny you..." he smiled and kissed you again then unzipped his pants. You hear a knock on the door.
Sakura: "Gaara? Akauri? You in there? Times up?" Gaara didn't stop kissing you, and you didn't stop kissing him. Nothing was going to ruin this moment and what was about to happen.
Ino giggled: "Let's let them have their fun" and you two continued where you left off. He slid into your body overcoming your virgin barrier as you whimpered and latched onto him for support and he instatnly tensed.
Gaara: "You didn't tell me you were a virgin... I'm so sorry..." you shook your head.
You: "It's ok... I wanted you to be my first..." you smiled and kissed him which he instantly gave you as you both moaned in pleasure. Eh, they had like ten other closets. You would need this one for just a bit longer.
Friday, April 17, 2009
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WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletei love gaara
ReplyDeletesame here...he's awesome...
DeleteWow that was pretty good but the "you" part kinda threw me off lol
DeleteWHOA! That was great!
ReplyDeleteomg, wow, aww gaara was sweet "i'm so sorry, you didn't tell me" awwwwww ^_^
ReplyDeleteawwwwwwwwwwww that was awsome
ReplyDelete^.^ thanks all!
ReplyDeleteGAARA IS SOOOOOOOOO HOT LOVE HIM
ReplyDeleteaaawwwww gaara is so kawaii!!!!!
ReplyDeleteAwww.. That is probably one of the best ones I've ever read. Sure, Gaara was a little out of character but to make a love story with him in it you have to bend his personality a little. I also loved how you actually write well. Very good. I love it [and Gaara, hehehehehee].
ReplyDeleteAwwwwww...........I love Gaara hes sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo H-O-T!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletehmmp it wasent that great -_-...(WTF THAT WAS THE BEST STORY EVER!!!! AND GAARA HE IS SOOO HAWWT!!!!) loser...
ReplyDeleteXD thanks again!
ReplyDeleteOMG u need to make more of these
ReplyDeleteya
DeleteI love this one...<3 good job
ReplyDelete*dreamy sigh* I think my computer exploded and Im in heaven...
ReplyDelete^.^
ReplyDeleteI LUV GAARA!!!! And wow
ReplyDeletecould ya possibly make a kakashi story .... ur storys r amazing!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletethnaks but sorry.... i really only write stories for Gaara...
ReplyDeleteGaara is freaking sexy! more Gaara!GAARA! GAARA!GAARA!!
ReplyDeletenow that, i could do
ReplyDeleteanother gaara lemonn!!!!!!!!!!!! Pleasey :3
ReplyDeleteI really loved this! keep writing about Gaara! He's the best!
ReplyDeleteyay! thanks! i will... very soon... maybe even today! :D
ReplyDeleteyou have to write more Gaara lemons!This was fab!
ReplyDeletehehe, i just wrote one! enjoy! its called "You're mine now"
ReplyDeleteAre you goin to write anymore? that was brill!
ReplyDeletethanks! but there will always be more Gaara ~.^
ReplyDeleteooohhh! i love Gaara sooo much!Keep writting about him never mind anyone else its all about Gaara!lol! :)
ReplyDeleteXD i know right? and that is why i have 16 love stories about him on quizilla! lol... ^///^U
ReplyDeletei luv gaara he's like my fav he so hot and awsome i wish i was on naruto
ReplyDeleteme too, but I'd rather have my character Siuske on there, she'd be sooo adorible!
ReplyDeletethis was sooo hot! you have to write more about Gaara! and know you hear it all the time but you really are good!x) I <3 Gaara!
ReplyDeletelol, but i never get tired of it! thanks! i will!
ReplyDeleteOMG. I love it. Please, please, please make more! *begs*
ReplyDeleteI need more Gaara! That was sweet <3
ReplyDeletewell remember, if you need more Gaara, theres always more on my quizilla page... like 16 stories...
ReplyDeleteCute! <3
ReplyDeleteIt was sooo cool!XD
ReplyDelete-darkfire2you
make a lemon for kakashi >.< plaeeeeesssseee ! i bet it'll be just like all the others, great !
ReplyDeletegaara is soooo cute >.< t was the best lemon i've ever read for gaara >.< [p.s i wrote the one comment above this too 0.o]
ReplyDeleteomg that was so smexy I LOVE GAARA!!!!
ReplyDeletewhoa this is really good i've written one about him too but i'm to scared to put it on the internet
ReplyDeleteawsome im gunna read em all
ReplyDelete;D
I LOVE GAARA HES HOT ^-^ ur the best wrighter ever
ReplyDeleteOMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!I THINK I DIED AND WENT TO MANGA HEAVEN!!I'VE READ ALMOST ALL YOUR STORIES,BUT I LOVE THIS ONE THE MOST BECAUSE MY SMEXY HUSBAND IS IN IT!I LOVE YOUR STORIES AND GAARA SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!X0
ReplyDeleteGaara deserves to be loved and not treated as an outcast. Way to go
ReplyDelete-darkfire2you
garra is sooooo sexy and this is the best lemon i've ever read!!
ReplyDeleteTHAT WAS THE MOST STUPID, SEXY DRIVEN, SINFUL THING I'VE EVER HAD THE HORROR OF READING!!!!! YOU ARE SICK MINDED!!!!! . . . I LOVED IT!!!
ReplyDeleteJeeeeeeezzzz, buddy/girl,... calm down...o_O
DeleteOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Myyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy Goooooooooooooooddddddddd
ReplyDeleteXD glad you all liked it!
ReplyDeleteAw... that was sweet :) I've read your stories, you are really talented. don't stop writing! :D
ReplyDeletewhat's your quizilla username so I can look you up? Mine's NarutoxMusic please send me a message!
ReplyDeleteAWESOME!!
ReplyDeleteThat was the best story ive ever read you should be a writer!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteCanya make one with Iruka sensei?I lub him......BUT THAT WAS SO HOT!!!!i need a shower now...
ReplyDeleteI LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEE GARRA-KUN SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH
ReplyDeletethe best. gaara iz 2 hot.i wish i wuz a character...well i made tp 1 alredy.nasari iz da name.made trillions ov lemonz....but i wrote it on papr.damn u broke computa.anyway awsome story.coold u write 1 usin my char scinc ya know. oh yea gaara -n- nasari 4eva. (sory other gaara lovas) p.s fabo lemon
ReplyDeleteGaara,shika,nije and kiba are my fav ones^^
ReplyDeletemine 2.came bak 2 reed it again.betta second time around.:) i think that they all rock!
ReplyDeleteAwesome. It was really good
ReplyDeleteGAARA-KUN! OMG OMG OMG x3
ReplyDeleteI'm in love! xD
Thank you for writing a story like this :D
Gaara is too freakin amazing for his own gud...but i luv it! lolz,this was sweet. i luv ur other stories on Quizilla. They are amazing. U've got ure talent.
ReplyDeleteGAARA IS MINE AND MINE ALONE SO LEAVE HIM 2 ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteWow i love you Gaara!!!!^^
ReplyDeletethis is so hot!!!
wow thats the real Gaara hes realy loveing the oulny reason he acts the way he dose in the showes is no one understands him and his own dad tryed to kill him so he doaent want to get close to some one just to get hurt
ReplyDeleteGarra-kun is so hot but Kibba-sama is the best if i was in naruto i would want to be with Kibba and Gaara would be a realy realy good friend
that was the most awesome gaara story I have EVER laid eyes apon
ReplyDeleteplease write another
ReplyDeleteThat was so awseome! I read all of your work and I love it! I want to become an Author when I gorw up and reading this inspired me more. BTW Kiba is my favorite! It was the best Kiba story I ever read.
ReplyDeleteAWSOME
ReplyDeletethis is probably the BEST Gaara lemon ive EVER READ!!!!* fangirl scream* KYAAAAAA!!!!!
ReplyDeletesexy haha!
ReplyDeleteOMG U ROCK GAARA!!!! I mean... I wish it was me?
ReplyDeleteWOOOOOOHH GAARA! i luvv him
ReplyDeleteDud this was lame. This has to be the shortest, and worst Gaara lemon I've read.
ReplyDeletethanks! my user name on quizzila is naruangirl16
ReplyDeleteVery cool!I luv Gaara!he's sooooo kawaii and smexy!!!!Good job,u r awesome!!!
ReplyDeleteawwwwwwww...that was really sweet!!! pls write more!!!!
ReplyDeletepersonally i perfer sweet over sexy...good tho gaara.is.......(is wat)......EFFIN H-O-t!!!
ReplyDeletepls write more plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz
ReplyDeleteWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW that was so goooood.....write more!
ReplyDeletei want gaara too.
ReplyDeleteOMG?? Crap, is that even a story?? ==||... but i think it'll be better if you do not write those lemony stuff...
ReplyDeleteI love all your stories. :3
ReplyDeleteI wish I could write that well.
And I'm not asking you to write more, Im BEGGING. :D
dude that was sweet
ReplyDeleteI LOVE your lemons. Please write about Shino. I am a major Shino fangirl.
ReplyDeleteI love your lemons! Can you write a Seven minutes in heaven with Kakashi next?
ReplyDeletecould you do a shino seven minutes in heaven? i love your work!
ReplyDeleteOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMGGGG!!! I'm speechless, that is the best story i've ever seen...I LOVE GAARA, u are really talented, not kidding.
ReplyDeleteTHE BEST, Keep writing about Gaara.
HE is SOOOOOOOOO HOT...HE'S MINE. ;)
Gaara is only my second choice by like a tiny-little bit. My first choice is Shino. Write about Shino or Im gonna go CRAZY. I love your work.
ReplyDeleteThat was really good!! lol i luv gaara! good job ;>
ReplyDeletegood job! gaara is so sweet in this one...:3
ReplyDeleteNOO! I LOVE IT! But I want more detail haha!
ReplyDelete~kyaa!!!~ I would SOOOOOOO marry Gaara if I could! I was probably blushing the whole time I was reading this! *fan girl scream* I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
ReplyDeleteHATE GAARA AND LOVE HIM SOMETIME BUT I ALSO HAVE STANGE DREAM.ANYWAY LOVE THE STORY GOOD LUCK LOL.
ReplyDeleteSORRY, i didnt finish it friken, was HOT
ReplyDeletesorry i didnt finish it was sssssssssssssoooooooooooooooooooooooooooo hot YEA!!!
ReplyDeleteOMFG!!!! I LOVE ME SOME GAARA!!! HE SO SMEXY!!
ReplyDeleteI like how he was like "please don't deny me":3
SOOO FREAKIN AWESOME!!! <3
WOOT WOOT!!! I got shivers just reading that! Gaara is awesome! I luved it!! Make more Gaara lemons!!!!! PLZ!!!!!!XD <3
ReplyDeletesorry but gaara is not like that unless he loves someone more then anyone or anything. and by the way gaara dosent love anyone the syomble on his forhead shows that a demon loveing only himself. GOOD LUCK on making him love you guys. i know that because i have been thought lot just like him . ithink he will like you guys.
ReplyDeleteIf you have read the manga or watched the anime then you would understand how garra changed after the chunin exams. Due to garras fight with naruto garra became nicer,not psychotic, kind hearted and naruto became a brotherly figure to garra, garra also became the kazekage and was loved by the villagers
Deletei think garra is awsome dont u
ReplyDeleteAAAWWWW!!!! gaara!! ur too sweet!!! :3 this was AWESOME!!!!!!!!! <3333333333
ReplyDeletethis one was so romantic!!! ^^ i loved it ur the best! *tears fall from eye*
ReplyDeleteOMG I <3 Gaara!!!!!!!!!!!!! U made meh happy! :D U ish cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletehot <3
ReplyDeleteAwesome!But you know,a 'Bad' Gaara lemon would be totally awesome!
ReplyDeleteOk, first gaara was out of character which I HATE. And second this piece of writing had a lot of mistakes, third this was not at all a lemon. You said this would be like M-rated but it had noting to make it M-rated. So overall I didn't like this. Sorry.
ReplyDeleteTo the person who said the stuff ahead of me. GO FUCK YOURSELD!!!!!! Her writings are way better than anyone I have ever read. And just so you know I have read a lot of them. Ignore the jerk naruangirl16. I love your writings.
ReplyDeletei agree :)
ReplyDeletewell, this is the best story i've ever read about gaara(lemon).
ReplyDeletekeep it up lol!
its perfect!
I love your work and I would like to suggest 2 things. 1, make one about my beloved Shino-kun. And 2, write some about different anime like One Piece or Soul Eater.
ReplyDeleteThat was really great but why do you leave the end untold?
ReplyDeleteman some of you are just plain freaky on hear.........ive never incountered so many garra fans at once,and whats with all the kakashi fans ascing(sp) for a kakashi one..NEWS FLASH-she already sayed she didnt wright about anyone but garra so please stop asking. i can only inagen how fustraiting that is.anyway plase wright more storys ive already read everone of yours thats finished so please try to finnish some more.THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletecontact me at moonlighthunter#21 also on quizilla ur awsome,keep it up!
wow, didn't know there were so many Shino fans. anyway, ur beloved Gaara just got a HELL of a lot hotter! please make more!
ReplyDeleteoh, and more Akatsuki lemons. U haven't reached Hidan yet ;)
The person who wrote this is my freekin idol ;)
ReplyDeleteOMG!! 0__0!! *nosebleed!! that was awsome!!!!
ReplyDelete^-^
O__O oh god. Gaara is so hot (melts completely) i would pass out of my crush and I got stuck in a closet together ^_^
ReplyDeleteThat was so fuckin hot! If I told anyone what else I would to gaara I would probably get arrested!
ReplyDeletegaara isn't kawaii he is sexy but i get your point i love your lemons could you do a suigetsu lemon i love him soo much he reminds me of viral in ttgl cuz the teeth also does anyone think that karin kinda looks like a female grell sutcilff the glasses the hair and they both like boys that have same color hair odd one more thing uryu in bleach and sasuke have a rip off to me cuz they are both the last of there clan same attiude and everything else i think bleach r naruto eitherway are rip offs of themselfs
ReplyDeletelol cool:)
ReplyDeleteHi there!I'm new to the blogspot website,but this is very well detailed.I've also read the deleted lemons of your Gaara love stories.Also,speaking of your stories,I've read every single Gaara love story you've posted naruangirl 16.I hope you can comment me back,because it feels so great that there is a girl about my age who loves Gaara as much as I do
ReplyDeleteokay i love it but why why???? it has to be virgin again
ReplyDeleteall i have to say is
ReplyDeleteDAMN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I've read most/all of ur 7 min in heaven.. and this is definitely my favorite..
ReplyDeleteGaara's so sexy..
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE MAKE MORE!!!!
ReplyDeleteOMFG!! THIS IS SOOO FRIGGIN' AWESOME!!
ReplyDeletePLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ MAKE MORE!!!
I'm good at lemons, but I will never compare to you.I am gonna call you sempai!
Keep up the friggin' awesome work Sempai!! xD
GAARA WOULD ALWAYS BE MINE!!! *0*
ReplyDeleteThat was amazing :)
ReplyDeleteI'm sorry, but I have to say that I was a little disappointed. I only say this because I've read a lot (almost all) of your stories gaara and non-gaara related and I feel as though this story doesn't meet your expectations.
ReplyDeleteAnd please don't take this the wrong way I'm just saying what I think is true.
nice job i love it
ReplyDeleteOh u have got to make more .........all I have to say is steamy and sexy I luv Gaara
ReplyDeleteGaara!
ReplyDeleteOMG you are a great writer ! really!
ReplyDeleteThis is EXACTLY what happen with me and my bf lol only ive never payed 7heaven -/////- we just ended up in my friends bedroom while she was at work hahahahaha! But rly this is almost like my firstime losig my "virginity" to my bf XD
ReplyDeletei love gaara he's one of my favorites
ReplyDeletei wish i could marry him
even if he is the kazekage
i cant belive he thinks hes a monster
he's sooo hooot
awsome
please make more
frm angelica
that was amazing... I just wish more people would make forced ones.
ReplyDeletei thought gaara did not know what love is
ReplyDeletemmmmm soooo hot....does that make me a pervert? lol XD
ReplyDeleteI LOVE GAARA!!!!!!!!!!! i've read a lot of these, but this one has to be the best so far!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI LUV IT!!! ITZ MY FAVORITE
ReplyDeletedamn that was HOT!
ReplyDeleteGaara is so caring "Sorry, you didnt tell me..." awww I LOVE GAARA!
ReplyDeleteAMAZING!!!!!
ReplyDeletethis is awesome! i love gaara! <3
ReplyDeleteMmmm... sandy
ReplyDeleteWooooooooooowwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!! i LUV GAARA!!!!!!!!!!! :3
ReplyDeleteyummm... gaara is the hottest and cutiest guy ever!!! XD
ReplyDeleteeyebrowless but so f***ing hott this was awesome
ReplyDeleteI'm sorry, but that was THE WORST!
ReplyDeleteI've seen much better lemon stories. Giving the fan the chance to expierience it as themselves. Not as one of YOUR characters. Pretty sad when you are the only one getting to fantasize this isn't it Akurai? Pathetic, always the same as usual.
Allow me to tell you this..
If you ever write a story like this again, make sure you check typo's, and make it not oh so personal for you. Nothing really hot here anyway. You probably are about 15. When you learn to write a better fiction, then post.
What the fuck?! If you had nothing better to say, then don't say it! It's people like you that always bring others down. Don't read these things if your just going to criticize people's work! Yeah... sure, she might have some mistakes here and there, but that's only natural! Not everyone's perfect like you seem to be!
DeleteAnd, "Allow me to tell you this..."
People actually work hard to write things like this. Let's see you write a fanfiction. I didn't think so. Oh Yeah, there's one more thing I have to say. Stop being a fucking bitch and get a fucking life, Miss. Oh I'm So Perfect!
Oh and don't worry naruangirl16, your fanifics are awesome! Don't change them or the way you write because of some bitch that has no life and says they are pathetic. Please write more! ^.-
ReplyDeleteIsn't this on Quibblo? BTW, Me luv your writing! Neji-kun<3,Deidara-kun<3, Gaara-kun<3!!!!!
ReplyDeleteOMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! o-o-o-m-m-m-g-g-g all i can say is this:eEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
ReplyDeleteI wish Gaara was real (not just in mah head)!
ikr?!?!?!?!?!?! FTW!!!!!!!!!!!!
DeleteGarra is hot and I love him please write more about Gaara!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this was so cool.(u r now my fave person!)
ReplyDeleteMy 11 year old cousin read this and now she's scarred for life. It's an awesome story btw :).
ReplyDeletelol
Deleteawww I want a gaara of my own so bad
ReplyDeleteSo nice
ReplyDeleteGaara is a smexy guy lol I love him my desktop image is him lol Keep up the great work
ReplyDeleteI <3 GAARA!!! :)
ReplyDelete>\\\\\\\\\\\\\< gaara-sama is so hot *licks lips* eventually i love bad boys
ReplyDeleteI barfed rainbows and had a epic nose bleed because of this.
ReplyDeleteI'm a person who absolutely is a Gaara fan girl! I even think he's adorable when he kills!!! ^_^ Oh, and his surprised face is kawaaaaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteAaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwww
ReplyDeletecan you do a Hidan one please!!!!
ReplyDeleteGoing into a closet will never be the same again. This was awwwwwwesoome!!!!
ReplyDeleteYup...I'm going to shove that boy into a closet and molest the hell out of him he's that hot...lets just hope his sibling's don't find us before I'm done. That would so kill the mood.
ReplyDeleteYou should write more Gaara lemons
ReplyDeleteHe's Mine
ReplyDelete