Deidara held a piece of candy in his hand: “Do you really want it Akauri?”
You nodded: “Please Dei? Pretty, pretty, pretty please?”
Deidara: “On one condition?”
You nodded: “Anything!”
Deidara: “You have to go into that closet, for seven minutes” he pointed to it. You thought this over.
You shrugged: “Ok!” he gave you the candy and you ate it quickly then walked into the closet while he locked the door.
Deidara: “Have fun…” Y
ou: “But there’s nothing in here?”
Voice: “Yes there is…” you felt someone wrap their arms around you. You gasped and moved away from them.
You: “Who’s there?” you felt them stroke your face.
Voice: “It’s just me, Akauri…” you blushed knowing that voice quite well.
You: “Itachi?” he licked your face making you turn red.
Itachi: “You guessed it…” one of his hands went to your breast pressing against it making you whimper.
You: “Whadda you doing?”
Itachi: “I only get one chance to do this, there is no way I’m missing out…” he kissed from your neck up to your jaw and then to your lips. You tried pushing him away but he was too strong for you to beat him.
You whimpered again: “Itachi… Th-This is wrong…” he began opening your shirt.
Itachi: “Then how come it feels so right?” the hand that wasn’t on your chest was upping your to skirt going to a certain area where you squeaked a little. Itachi has never acted like this before… You were turning redder the longer this went on. Soon he got off your shirt and he was kissing all over your chest. You tried stopping him numerous times but he wouldn’t listen. He shoved you against the wall and got fiercer. You couldn’t hold back your moans. His tongue flicked up then down your nipple making you tremble with pleasure. His other hand slid down your stomach and then past your skirt, up your thigh then against your dampening panties.
Itachi chuckled: “Seems you’re enjoying this more then you’re making it seem…” you shook your head trying to not to think about how good this felt. His fingers trusted up, sliding digging into you threw your panties causing to you to whimper uncontrollably and instinctively held onto Itachi by clinging onto his cloak. He moved his fingers hooking one into your panties pulling them down leading you to feel bare and cold. Your blush worsened as they dropped around your ankles and you had no choice but to step out. You were left in nothing but your skirt and socks. Without warning Itachi inserted one of his fingers inside your tight, wet flower.
You gasped: “Itachi!”
Itachi: “Don’t worry, this will make it hurt less once I fully take you” you shut your eyes tightly as he made his fingers stretch out your insides preparing you for what you felt pushing flush against your side threw his clothes. Right when you were about to release from Itachi’s actions he pulled his hand away.
You whimpered in protest: “N-No!” you shook your head. You were so close; you’ve never felt like this before. You heard Itachi chuckled devilishly.
Itachi: “I knew you liked it… Now… To make you mine…” you heard his cloak drop to the ground as he slid down his pants far enough to release his erection that pressed warmly against you’re stomach. You pushed him away.
You: “No…. P-Please…” you squeaked as he hoisted you up. “I’m a virgin…” you felt tears. Itachi softly kissed your lips. He rubbed your thighs, kissing you again aliening your bodies up as you prepare for collision. You didn’t think this was worth a piece of candy.
Itachi: “Don’t worry… I’ll make sure you enjoy this…” he smoothed your sides, kissing you again aliening your bodies up as you prepare for collision. You didn’t think this was worth a piece of candy.
Deidara started banging on the door: “Ok Itachi, that’s enough, you’re not aloud to steel her virginity.” You blushed even more if that was possible.
Itachi growled: “Go away, when I’m finished, I’ll let you know.”
Deidara: “Itachi-“
Itachi: “Leave!”
Deidara: “I’m gone!” there were no more other noises besides the two of yours in the closet. Itachi went a lot further then seven minutes in heaven…
Friday, April 17, 2009
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OMG I LOVED IT SO MUCH! I'VE PROBABLY READ THAT MORE THAN 10 TIMES. GOOD ON YA!! WRITE MORE
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DeleteAww that sucks its over but it was a great story
DeleteThis was great I have a huge crush on itachi so this really made my day ☺️😏
Deletewow cool, is it finished though?
ReplyDelete*nose bleed* I think im drooling... you have to right more!!! XD
ReplyDeletelol, thanks... i might, depends
ReplyDeleteno more!!!! no itachi pep come up and scare me ether ok
Deletecan chu make a hidan one C:?
Deleteme again who wrote the 1st comment. you have to write more of itachi lemons, i absolutely loved this lemon. thank you so much for his story, I LOVE YOU and Itachi, Deidara and Sasuke (i love there lemons 2 by the way.) ^_^
ReplyDeletethanks again! im glad you liked them! maybe i might, yeah
ReplyDeletecool I love it . I want more =]] , soo cool I love it
ReplyDeleteNo! My virginity's been stolen! Deidara was supposed to do that! And btw, LLOOVVEEED IIITTT
ReplyDeleteXD thanks!
ReplyDeleteL-O-VE Love it! (=^-^=)
ReplyDeleteholy cr@p. that wos the best 7 mins in heaven 4 itachi eva, i luv itachi alot but not in a fangurl way. please write more.
ReplyDeletethanks one more time! maybe
ReplyDeletetotaly worth a piece of candy XD
ReplyDeleteI sorta liked it but even thowe I in love with Deidara,Sasori and Tobi I kinda like Itachi but mostly as a big brother.But I would like it more if you write one with a girl named Moona she has fox ears and fox tail.
ReplyDeleteP.S pleas
Good thing I did the deidara one first.
ReplyDeletesorry but im not really doing one shots right now... but thanks!
ReplyDeletei. think. i'm. going. to. explode! ^.^ it was really good ! i loved it !>.<
ReplyDeletethat was so so totally smexy I LOVE ITACHI!!!!
ReplyDeleteOMFG(OH MY FUCKING GOD)!!!!!I can't believe this!I think I might just die!Best 7 minutes in heaven EVER!!!PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteThat was amazing, Although I perfer Hidan (weird, right?)^.^ I wish I could write like you *-*!!
ReplyDeleteIt was ok. I would have to say that you should have writen more about what happened though.
ReplyDeleteHOLY SHIT!! AMAZING JOB!!! WRITE MORE PLEAZZZZZ!!! ^/_\^
ReplyDeleteheh just for the candy hey?
Wowie wow wow!!!
ReplyDeleteTHAT WAS AWESOME!!!( i like kiba's best of all, though)
ReplyDeleteWOAH................................................
ReplyDeleteOMG.... Write more (nose bleed) plz plz plz with a cherrie on top
DeleteWrite more
ReplyDeletei Command u
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all i have to say is lmao and good job!!!!
ReplyDeleteur a really gd writer plz write more
ReplyDeleteevery one loves ur Lemons!!!!!!
tat was so not worth a peice of candy =_="
ReplyDeleteGAH!
ReplyDeleteYou must finish them!
D:
Too amazing to stop!
Continue Continue Continue!!!
OMG i loved it it was awsome!!!!
ReplyDeleteO/////O IT STOPS AT THE GOOD PART WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!! *gose all dramatic with lightning clouds everywhere* @//////@ -spppaaaazzzzzziiiinnnnnnggggg-
ReplyDeletelol, thanks! maybe
ReplyDeleteLol didn't think this was worth a piece of candy haha nice!!
ReplyDeleteI love this! :D
ReplyDeletehey it's not rape if u like it and it's not stealing if u want it to b takin rite?
ReplyDeleteOMG x3 NOSEBLEED!
ReplyDeleteomg i cant stop reading all of ur stories
ReplyDeleteMore more please add a sex scene:3
ReplyDeleteomg. tat is lik totally wicked.you go girl.write more lemons
ReplyDeleteUGLY DUDE MADE SASUKE SEEM LIKE A BABY!!! GO ITACHI!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteawsome!
ReplyDeleteThat was by far 1 of the BEST Itachi lemons EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletethanks! i agree with the rape thing
ReplyDeleteo i think i read it sooooooo many times i cant count!!! haha awesome! XD
ReplyDeleteawesome you should make more like this
ReplyDeletexD lmao
ReplyDeleteI love you!!! Not in a gay/lez way...
ReplyDeleteI loved the part when deidara is like your not aloud to steal her virginity xD
ReplyDeleteWow *NoseBleed* so many pervy thought going by in my head write more lemons
ReplyDeleteItachi is such a CREEP, a FREAK, a PERV. He's HORRIBLE. He's DISGUSTING. He's REPULSIVE. I hate his guts and I want him DEAD. Now that that's out of my systom, if a girl says no, leave her alone. I know I'm the only one who thinks this but if both people aren't into it from the start it shouldn't happen, especialy if it's one of theirs first time.
ReplyDeleteItachi, Jiraya and Kakashi best ever ninja. I have a thing 4 Kakashi and Itachi and God I wish they were real.... A threesome would be inevitable... Yeah!
DeleteI totaly agree with the last post. He is a major creep and had no right to do that.
ReplyDeletee.e guys its a FANFIC STORY. >< omg. D: stop hating. its part of the whole, lemon, seductive, love...oh god. I LOVED IT >:O! ><
ReplyDeletei love it
ReplyDeletenice work^O^
Kekeke. Interesting. xD
ReplyDeleteWHAT THE FUCK!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteAH!!! XDDDD FAN GIRL SCREAM!! that was WAY TOO intense for me!! XDDD
ReplyDeleteHoly f*cking ccrap, I GOT WET FROM THAT!!! WRITE MORE!!!!
ReplyDeleteHOLY SHIT!!! IM SO TURNED ON!!!!!!!!! MAKE MORE!!! XD
ReplyDeleteOMJ, I LOVED that. And to the people who call it rape, yeah, he did kind of force Akauri, but I think she had mixed feelings about it...
ReplyDeleteWRITE MORE!! I mean, ferserious, I didn't like Itachi before but now I do!!
IF YOU DON'T WRITE MORE I WILL BE FURIOUS!!
I love these types of stories all my friends call me the perverted one
ReplyDeleteOmg, AWESOME!! I LOVED IT!!!
ReplyDeleteI don't know if my comments matter but i really enjoyed that one i love all the details!!! AND if ppl say rude things bout these or wtf just ignore them cuz theres a lot of ppl that u made love excited! u have talent and everyones perverted at least at a time if u think about it.
ReplyDeleteomg i loved it!!!
ReplyDeletetotally awesommmme make way more lemons pleeeeaaaasssse or i wiill destroy you all!
ReplyDeleteO...M...G!!!!!! i am such an itachi fangirl and you have the best 7MIH EVER!!!!! and you should totaly make more!!!!!! ^.^'
ReplyDeleteI WISH THAT WHERE ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI THINK?
YEA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol thats so hot..... *nosebleed* thats meh.... ^^ you should make more! ur really good at it and can u please make a kankuro one?
ReplyDeleteyou have got to write anothet itachi one!!! i loved it!!
ReplyDeletethis is really good. keep writing lemons ur really good at it :D.
ReplyDeleteI don't think this was rape because, she enjoyed it, and i think she wanted it, just not in the closet. at least that was how it registered in my mind
ReplyDeleteYou have to write more Itachi lemons! I love Itachi soooooo much! I've read this so many times! I can't stop reading it!
ReplyDeletelol so....soo sexy~! ^_^
ReplyDeleteI think I've read this before, a LONG time ago. Either way, it's still awesome. Please make more?
ReplyDeleteWow! I usually don't like the Itachi one's, but this...oh yea. And I agree, it might not have been worth a peice of candy :P Please, write more!
ReplyDeleteThat was so totally worth a piece of candy :D
ReplyDeleteDAMN RIGHT!!!
Deleteplease do a Deidara one :3
ReplyDelete7mins N Heaven, is the best lemon I have read in awhile, and I think that was so worth a piece of candy. hehehe this is so going to blind my best friend. form a Boots
ReplyDeleteYou should write one that is NOT is script form it's a lot more riveting when you write in, for example, third person POV or maybe even first person would be better, I tell you this because you have a creative mind. Now use what's in that creative mind of yours and put it at its best by showing your abilities in the highest quality of writing.
ReplyDeleteCheck me out at:
http://www.fanfiction.net/~akurnaskulblaka
Leave a review if you'd like to, just don't flame! Byesies! ^__^
Omg I loved this sooooooo much!!!!!!! You need to write more Itachi lemons. Please
ReplyDeletelove them all i wish there was more to them
ReplyDeleteomg a virgin i meen wtf and then the tears??? come on men you write a great stories and all but this is itachiii it has to be wild am not gonna lie to you i stop reading the story when i saw the part noo i am a virgin what the hell not all of as are romantic you know but i like the one with deidara it was a good story
ReplyDeleteCome on it was good! I loved it alot! Show some respect.... Just saying...
Deleteuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh*nosebleads*hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
ReplyDeleteIta:O.O
Tobi:*pokes me, i fall* are you o.k Vi-san???
Me:*drools while still nosebleading, points to computer*
Ita&tobi:*stares at computer*O.O
omgsh!!! deidara didnt help!!!
ReplyDelete*yay!!*
oooh i liked it!
ReplyDeletesadface! ita-kun raped me!
ReplyDeletei love itachi something bout him just wow
ReplyDelete[blushes];]
OMG I have read this more than 15 times all
ReplyDeleteready. Your so good at writing things like this XD
wow gross and enjoying at the same time but who ever wrote this you did really good i read it more than 30 times it was very joyful
ReplyDeleteI would go into a closet for a candy
ReplyDelete*Lemon ends*
ReplyDeleteItachi: "I'm done!!!!"
Akauri" O__O "Definatly NOT worth a piece of candy....."
O.O more than 7 minutes?......hours??....DAYS??? the world will never know....
ReplyDeleteYes he could have used tsukiyomi I think it is spelled...Oh in the name of whatever god/goddess is listening/watching please let that be happening then let everything that happened in the Tsukiyomi be REAL!!!!
DeleteThe candy was a lie.
ReplyDeleteThe candy did nothing wasnt worth it I wanted moooore CANDY!!!!!!!!!!!!! T^T candy.... write more plllllllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzz???????? :3
ReplyDeleteSo worth a piece of candy LOL XD
ReplyDeleteDERE MUSHT BEH A HIDAN LEMON !!!!! =3
ReplyDeletethat was great but could you make a pein one I love pein^^
ReplyDeleteSo not worth a piece of candy.....
ReplyDeleteA Madara Uchiha one would be amazing *w* and a Pein/Nagato one owo .... and Kakuzu x///3
ReplyDeleteWorth the candy *_* love it, big fan of itachi, I can draw him
ReplyDeleteyou should make a shisui one
ReplyDeleteXD.. Ohhh shit, ' okay i'm gone!'
ReplyDeleteomg i remember when i read this *Q*
ReplyDeleteOmg major nose bleed
ReplyDeleteI like your story and have a real one of my own
ReplyDeleteI am being sexually attacked by jesus christ
i think i was attacked by jesus christ i mean the real one and need some help please
I opened my pineal gland and entered in to the spiritual world and i met a spiritual person there who said they were
jesus christ and since i met them they said i cant leave the spirit world and i have been attacked by them for trying to close my minds eyes and ive been caused
alot of pain by them then the name jesus christ pops in to my mind
and the other day i tested if it was really him by going to a song called antichrist superstar by marilyn manson and the thought antichrist just disappeared from my mind as if by
magic and a thought popped in to my mind saying antichrist does not work against jesus christ and then i started to feel pain again i know that this is unbelievable and i was in shock myself but this leads me to
believe that bad spirits are not the only ones that can attack or hurt people good ones can too what can i do to protect myself does anyone know?
this spirit tells me that i can never leave the spiritual world or i would be hurt for trying to and it has told me that i have to loose my virginity to jesus christ and i do not want to
then i would feel my self being attacked and thoughts pop in to my head like i cannot stop jesus christ from attacking me
and when i would try to say i cant feel pain a thought would pop up in to my mind saying yes i can and then the pain would come again
and sometimes i would start feeling like something invisible is moving in and out of my vagina but its extremely painful
and i would ask the spirit to stop but a thought would pop in to my mind saying that i cannot disobey jesus christ
and i also met another spirit in the spritual world who told me that he was satan and he had a very attractive voice
at first i did not believe because his voice was so attractive and i was picturing satan to sound like a monster or something but this spirit started off being nice and then it just started grabbing me raping me
i kept trying to fight it off but i could not and then a thought popped up in to my mind saying you better say you want to feel me like i was in heaven or im gonna kill you
so i started saying the words i want to feel satan the way he was in heaven and when i said those word i started feeling unbearable pain in my vagain and then i was drugged in to
the bathroom and told to lock the door and the thought im gonna teach you to be a little slut popped up in to my mind
and i was told to lick his dick and suck but i didn't know where it was so i started licking and sucking like it did then the though good popped up and he started raping me again
I did another test to see if the spirit who contacted me was really jesus christ
i said in jesus christ name no spirits other than the real jesus christ can contact me and no other spirits other that
jesus christ can contact me unless they are only the real jesus christ all other spirits leave in the name of jesus and then i prayed only jesus christ who is the real son of god can contact me and if you are not jesus christ you can
not contact me and no other spirits can other than the real jesus christ then his name popped in to my mind again then i felt more pain and the world jesus popped in to my mind again so jesus christ must be able to attack people too
the spirit told me that because jesus christ lived a sinless life on earth in the spiritual world he was allowed to do what ever he wanted and god was ok with it because on earth he lived a sinless life when he was alive
and if he can i bet many other good spirits can attack people too and god never told anyone about the pineal gland because he knows that the spiritual world is a dangerous place to humans so now i cant leave and the real jesus christ is attacking me help
this is not a lie i am telling the truth whether anyone believes me or not i am even being forced to listen to gospel music all the time or he will hurt me i don't know what
Dei...GO THE FUCK AWAY I AM BUSY WITH TACHI HERE!!! Yeah that's what I would love to yell through the door. And no I didn't spell Itachi's name wrong. Tachi is my nickname for Itachi, He would probably hate it, but I think it's kind of cute. It's better than Ita, or Chi, or tac, or something like that.
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