Friday, April 17, 2009

7minutes in Heaven with Itachi (lemon)

Deidara held a piece of candy in his hand: “Do you really want it Akauri?”

You nodded: “Please Dei? Pretty, pretty, pretty please?”

Deidara: “On one condition?”

You nodded: “Anything!”

Deidara: “You have to go into that closet, for seven minutes” he pointed to it. You thought this over.

You shrugged: “Ok!” he gave you the candy and you ate it quickly then walked into the closet while he locked the door.

Deidara: “Have fun…” Y

ou: “But there’s nothing in here?”

Voice: “Yes there is…” you felt someone wrap their arms around you. You gasped and moved away from them.

You: “Who’s there?” you felt them stroke your face.

Voice: “It’s just me, Akauri…” you blushed knowing that voice quite well.

You: “Itachi?” he licked your face making you turn red.

Itachi: “You guessed it…” one of his hands went to your breast pressing against it making you whimper.

You: “Whadda you doing?”

Itachi: “I only get one chance to do this, there is no way I’m missing out…” he kissed from your neck up to your jaw and then to your lips. You tried pushing him away but he was too strong for you to beat him.

You whimpered again: “Itachi… Th-This is wrong…” he began opening your shirt.

Itachi: “Then how come it feels so right?” the hand that wasn’t on your chest was upping your to skirt going to a certain area where you squeaked a little. Itachi has never acted like this before… You were turning redder the longer this went on. Soon he got off your shirt and he was kissing all over your chest. You tried stopping him numerous times but he wouldn’t listen. He shoved you against the wall and got fiercer. You couldn’t hold back your moans. His tongue flicked up then down your nipple making you tremble with pleasure. His other hand slid down your stomach and then past your skirt, up your thigh then against your dampening panties.

Itachi chuckled: “Seems you’re enjoying this more then you’re making it seem…” you shook your head trying to not to think about how good this felt. His fingers trusted up, sliding digging into you threw your panties causing to you to whimper uncontrollably and instinctively held onto Itachi by clinging onto his cloak. He moved his fingers hooking one into your panties pulling them down leading you to feel bare and cold. Your blush worsened as they dropped around your ankles and you had no choice but to step out. You were left in nothing but your skirt and socks. Without warning Itachi inserted one of his fingers inside your tight, wet flower.

You gasped: “Itachi!”

Itachi: “Don’t worry, this will make it hurt less once I fully take you” you shut your eyes tightly as he made his fingers stretch out your insides preparing you for what you felt pushing flush against your side threw his clothes. Right when you were about to release from Itachi’s actions he pulled his hand away.

You whimpered in protest: “N-No!” you shook your head. You were so close; you’ve never felt like this before. You heard Itachi chuckled devilishly.

Itachi: “I knew you liked it… Now… To make you mine…” you heard his cloak drop to the ground as he slid down his pants far enough to release his erection that pressed warmly against you’re stomach. You pushed him away.

You: “No…. P-Please…” you squeaked as he hoisted you up. “I’m a virgin…” you felt tears. Itachi softly kissed your lips. He rubbed your thighs, kissing you again aliening your bodies up as you prepare for collision. You didn’t think this was worth a piece of candy.

Itachi: “Don’t worry… I’ll make sure you enjoy this…” he smoothed your sides, kissing you again aliening your bodies up as you prepare for collision. You didn’t think this was worth a piece of candy.

Deidara started banging on the door: “Ok Itachi, that’s enough, you’re not aloud to steel her virginity.” You blushed even more if that was possible.

Itachi growled: “Go away, when I’m finished, I’ll let you know.”

Deidara: “Itachi-“

Itachi: “Leave!”

Deidara: “I’m gone!” there were no more other noises besides the two of yours in the closet. Itachi went a lot further then seven minutes in heaven…

108 comments:

  1. OMG I LOVED IT SO MUCH! I'VE PROBABLY READ THAT MORE THAN 10 TIMES. GOOD ON YA!! WRITE MORE

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  2. wow cool, is it finished though?

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  3. *nose bleed* I think im drooling... you have to right more!!! XD

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    1. no more!!!! no itachi pep come up and scare me ether ok

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    2. BazingaCapricorn(DA.account)July 1, 2012 at 8:20 AM

      can chu make a hidan one C:?

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  5. me again who wrote the 1st comment. you have to write more of itachi lemons, i absolutely loved this lemon. thank you so much for his story, I LOVE YOU and Itachi, Deidara and Sasuke (i love there lemons 2 by the way.) ^_^

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  6. thanks again! im glad you liked them! maybe i might, yeah

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  7. cool I love it . I want more =]] , soo cool I love it

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  8. No! My virginity's been stolen! Deidara was supposed to do that! And btw, LLOOVVEEED IIITTT

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  9. L-O-VE Love it! (=^-^=)

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  10. holy cr@p. that wos the best 7 mins in heaven 4 itachi eva, i luv itachi alot but not in a fangurl way. please write more.

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  11. totaly worth a piece of candy XD

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  12. I sorta liked it but even thowe I in love with Deidara,Sasori and Tobi I kinda like Itachi but mostly as a big brother.But I would like it more if you write one with a girl named Moona she has fox ears and fox tail.

    P.S pleas

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  13. Good thing I did the deidara one first.

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  14. sorry but im not really doing one shots right now... but thanks!

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  15. i. think. i'm. going. to. explode! ^.^ it was really good ! i loved it !>.<

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  16. that was so so totally smexy I LOVE ITACHI!!!!

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  17. OMFG(OH MY FUCKING GOD)!!!!!I can't believe this!I think I might just die!Best 7 minutes in heaven EVER!!!PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  18. That was amazing, Although I perfer Hidan (weird, right?)^.^ I wish I could write like you *-*!!

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  19. It was ok. I would have to say that you should have writen more about what happened though.

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  20. HOLY SHIT!! AMAZING JOB!!! WRITE MORE PLEAZZZZZ!!! ^/_\^

    heh just for the candy hey?

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  21. THAT WAS AWESOME!!!( i like kiba's best of all, though)

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  22. WOAH................................................

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    1. OMG.... Write more (nose bleed) plz plz plz with a cherrie on top

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  23. Write more
    i Command u
    ._.

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  24. all i have to say is lmao and good job!!!!

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  25. ur a really gd writer plz write more
    every one loves ur Lemons!!!!!!

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  26. tat was so not worth a peice of candy =_="

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  27. GAH!
    You must finish them!
    D:
    Too amazing to stop!
    Continue Continue Continue!!!

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  28. OMG i loved it it was awsome!!!!

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  29. O/////O IT STOPS AT THE GOOD PART WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!! *gose all dramatic with lightning clouds everywhere* @//////@ -spppaaaazzzzzziiiinnnnnnggggg-

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  30. Lol didn't think this was worth a piece of candy haha nice!!

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  31. hey it's not rape if u like it and it's not stealing if u want it to b takin rite?

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  32. OMG x3 NOSEBLEED!

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  33. omg i cant stop reading all of ur stories

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  34. More more please add a sex scene:3

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  35. omg. tat is lik totally wicked.you go girl.write more lemons

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  36. UGLY DUDE MADE SASUKE SEEM LIKE A BABY!!! GO ITACHI!!!!!!

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  37. That was by far 1 of the BEST Itachi lemons EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  38. thanks! i agree with the rape thing

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  39. o i think i read it sooooooo many times i cant count!!! haha awesome! XD

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  40. awesome you should make more like this

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  41. I loved the part when deidara is like your not aloud to steal her virginity xD

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  42. Wow *NoseBleed* so many pervy thought going by in my head write more lemons

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  43. Itachi is such a CREEP, a FREAK, a PERV. He's HORRIBLE. He's DISGUSTING. He's REPULSIVE. I hate his guts and I want him DEAD. Now that that's out of my systom, if a girl says no, leave her alone. I know I'm the only one who thinks this but if both people aren't into it from the start it shouldn't happen, especialy if it's one of theirs first time.

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    1. Itachi, Jiraya and Kakashi best ever ninja. I have a thing 4 Kakashi and Itachi and God I wish they were real.... A threesome would be inevitable... Yeah!

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  44. I totaly agree with the last post. He is a major creep and had no right to do that.

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  45. e.e guys its a FANFIC STORY. >< omg. D: stop hating. its part of the whole, lemon, seductive, love...oh god. I LOVED IT >:O! ><

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  46. Kekeke. Interesting. xD

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  47. WHAT THE FUCK!!!!!!!!

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  48. AH!!! XDDDD FAN GIRL SCREAM!! that was WAY TOO intense for me!! XDDD

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  49. Holy f*cking ccrap, I GOT WET FROM THAT!!! WRITE MORE!!!!

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  50. HOLY SHIT!!! IM SO TURNED ON!!!!!!!!! MAKE MORE!!! XD

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  51. OMJ, I LOVED that. And to the people who call it rape, yeah, he did kind of force Akauri, but I think she had mixed feelings about it...
    WRITE MORE!! I mean, ferserious, I didn't like Itachi before but now I do!!
    IF YOU DON'T WRITE MORE I WILL BE FURIOUS!!

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  52. I love these types of stories all my friends call me the perverted one

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  53. I don't know if my comments matter but i really enjoyed that one i love all the details!!! AND if ppl say rude things bout these or wtf just ignore them cuz theres a lot of ppl that u made love excited! u have talent and everyones perverted at least at a time if u think about it.

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  54. omg i loved it!!!

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  55. totally awesommmme make way more lemons pleeeeaaaasssse or i wiill destroy you all!

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  56. O...M...G!!!!!! i am such an itachi fangirl and you have the best 7MIH EVER!!!!! and you should totaly make more!!!!!! ^.^'

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  57. I WISH THAT WHERE ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I THINK?
    YEA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  58. lol thats so hot..... *nosebleed* thats meh.... ^^ you should make more! ur really good at it and can u please make a kankuro one?

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  59. you have got to write anothet itachi one!!! i loved it!!

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  60. this is really good. keep writing lemons ur really good at it :D.

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  61. I don't think this was rape because, she enjoyed it, and i think she wanted it, just not in the closet. at least that was how it registered in my mind

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  62. You have to write more Itachi lemons! I love Itachi soooooo much! I've read this so many times! I can't stop reading it!

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  63. lol so....soo sexy~! ^_^

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  64. I think I've read this before, a LONG time ago. Either way, it's still awesome. Please make more?

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  65. Wow! I usually don't like the Itachi one's, but this...oh yea. And I agree, it might not have been worth a peice of candy :P Please, write more!

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  66. That was so totally worth a piece of candy :D

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  67. please do a Deidara one :3

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  68. 7mins N Heaven, is the best lemon I have read in awhile, and I think that was so worth a piece of candy. hehehe this is so going to blind my best friend. form a Boots

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  69. You should write one that is NOT is script form it's a lot more riveting when you write in, for example, third person POV or maybe even first person would be better, I tell you this because you have a creative mind. Now use what's in that creative mind of yours and put it at its best by showing your abilities in the highest quality of writing.
    Check me out at:
    http://www.fanfiction.net/~akurnaskulblaka
    Leave a review if you'd like to, just don't flame! Byesies! ^__^

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  70. Omg I loved this sooooooo much!!!!!!! You need to write more Itachi lemons. Please

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  71. love them all i wish there was more to them

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  72. omg a virgin i meen wtf and then the tears??? come on men you write a great stories and all but this is itachiii it has to be wild am not gonna lie to you i stop reading the story when i saw the part noo i am a virgin what the hell not all of as are romantic you know but i like the one with deidara it was a good story

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  73. uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh*nosebleads*hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
    Ita:O.O
    Tobi:*pokes me, i fall* are you o.k Vi-san???
    Me:*drools while still nosebleading, points to computer*
    Ita&tobi:*stares at computer*O.O

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  74. omgsh!!! deidara didnt help!!!
    *yay!!*

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  75. oooh i liked it!

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  76. i love itachi something bout him just wow
    [blushes];]

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  77. OMG I have read this more than 15 times all
    ready. Your so good at writing things like this XD

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  78. wow gross and enjoying at the same time but who ever wrote this you did really good i read it more than 30 times it was very joyful

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  79. I would go into a closet for a candy

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  80. *Lemon ends*
    Itachi: "I'm done!!!!"
    Akauri" O__O "Definatly NOT worth a piece of candy....."

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  81. O.O more than 7 minutes?......hours??....DAYS??? the world will never know....

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  82. The candy did nothing wasnt worth it I wanted moooore CANDY!!!!!!!!!!!!! T^T candy.... write more plllllllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzz???????? :3

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  83. So worth a piece of candy LOL XD

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  84. DERE MUSHT BEH A HIDAN LEMON !!!!! =3

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  85. that was great but could you make a pein one I love pein^^

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  86. So not worth a piece of candy.....

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  87. A Madara Uchiha one would be amazing *w* and a Pein/Nagato one owo .... and Kakuzu x///3

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  88. Worth the candy *_* love it, big fan of itachi, I can draw him

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  89. you should make a shisui one

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  90. XD.. Ohhh shit, ' okay i'm gone!'

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  91. omg i remember when i read this *Q*

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