Friday, April 17, 2009

7minutes in Heaven with Sasori (lemon)

Here you sat in this circle. Glaring at all the faces around you before you leaned forward and placed your hand on the bottle.

You: “Why are we even playing this game, there’s two girls and eight guys. This is stupid.”

Deidara: “Just spin the damn bottle, un. Not like there’s anything else to do” you sighed and spun it waiting till it stopped. You looked up to see who it landed and then turned pink. The bottle was pointed at Sasori. You’ve loved Sasori for quiet awhile now. You looked at the floor trying to hide your blush then heard foot steps followed by the feeling of something wrapped around you. You looked and saw blue glowing strings were wrapping around your body. Your eyes widened when you noticed these were Sasori’s chakra strings and he was beginning to pull you into the closet with him. There were snickers heard throughout the people around you as you turned red.

Deidara: “Well, go on then, un” he pushed you and you fell to you side making it easier for Sasori to pull you in there. Soon you were in, the door was locked, and Sasori was standing over you in the dark, small room. You heard dark chuckling.

Sasori: “Finally I have you all to myself… Akauri…”

You: “S-Sasori…?” you felt the strings tugging on you till you stood then your hands got tied over your head. You felt your cheeks burn as you felt hands on your breast. They rubbed and circled them, squeezing them in his hand making you moan.

Sasori cooed: “Yes… Very nice…” a hot, wet tongue slid across your cheek.

You whimpered: “Wh-What are you doing?” as the toying with your breast continued you felt arousal when the nipple hardened and he ran his thumbs against them. You shivered and shifted a little moaning louder.

Sasori: “Having my way with you, there’s no point in trying to stop me.” He left go of your breast and you whimpered in protect but gasped when you left your self being lifted higher up the wall and then Sasori pressed his body against yours hoisting you up, his waist under yours as his hands slid down your arms sending shivers down your spine. You heard a ripping sound and realized that he had cut your shirt open with a knife. You blushed furiously feeling those hands grab your bare skin. The sensation was mind numbing. But what was even better then that? His lips now pressed openly against yours. You were surprised that his whole body was so soft and warm and responsive to touch and feel. You let his tongue in your mouth as he grinded his hips into yours. You moaned feeling his hardness. He groaned at the feeling.

You: “Mmm…. Sasori…” he growled and parted from your lips and kissed down your jaw and to your neck letting his tongue slip out on every kiss making you crave each one. He pulled away for a second, taking your skirt and rousingly damp panties with him and threw them somewhere leaving you unshielded.

Sasori: “Now…I need you…” his voice alluringly husky from his arousal. He shifted his cloak, opening it, and pulling his pants down a little and abruptly thrusting upward and you engulfed him making you scream in ecstasy and pain. He was your first.

Sasori: “You’re… So tight…” you whimpered and squirmed more hating the fact that your arms were tied over your head. As if reading your mind he let you go and your arms instantly went around his neck as he began pumping into you and your virginity was lost. The pain soon became pleasure though. You began moaning and calling his name as you both echoed in the closet and you felt an aching in your abdomen like something was building. You started panting and sweating as you tightened your grip on but he kept the same pace.

You panted: “Sasori, faster, harder, please!” he nodded quickening his pace and pushing deeper inside you as you began grinding against him to create more friction. You could feel your climax coming. You both began yelling.

You: “Sasori!” he pumped harder.

Sasori: “Akauri!” and you saw white as he hit you in just the right spot and you both came. As the after glow finished he fell over, taking you with him and landing on top of him. You heard laughter. And familiar voices…

Haidon: “Wow, just wow, how unmoral.”

Zetsu: “Sounds interesting…”

Kakuzu: “eww, in a closet, really Sasori?”

Itachi: “How long was that?”

Pein: “More then seven minutes”

Konan: “No comment.”

Deidara clapped and hollered: “Waitta go!” You blushed furiously remembering you two were in a closet with a room full of other members listening to everyone word, moan, gasp, and groan you just made. How embarrassing.

109 comments:

  1. Lol great ending to that, how embarassing XD

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    1. I put this on my notes in my I-Pod so I can read it everyday at school *blush blush* xD

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    2. melissa x deidaraMay 10, 2014 at 2:09 PM

      MAKE A TOBI ONE ALREADY!!!!!

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  3. And when we came out we said: "We were only pretending to make those sounds hahaha ..."

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  4. i liked it when he was like "eww in the closet really" that was funny

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  5. omg so hot i could barly breath at some moments

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  6. i felt a little blushy at the sex scenes

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  7. that was really good!! i got a lil jealous since im a fangirl of sasori but i still luved it ><

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  8. lol, good thing it was in Your point of view XD thanks!

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  9. "eww, in a closet, really?" Yes in a closet... coz dat shit was hawtt as hell hahaha

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  10. Thank youuuuuuuuu Thank youuuuuuuuuu ^-^
    Tehee i love Sasoriiii<33

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  11. IF you have no comment, then why bother posting? :P

    I loved it. Niiice. <3 *thumbs up*

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  12. so hot...thank you for that story

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  13. it was cool he he he

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  14. thanks! lol! i love getting postive feedback! ^0^

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  15. ROFL Zetsu was like sounds interesting xD

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  16. you know the good thing about sasori being wood ...he'll always be hardXD >.<

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  17. nice your joke is so funny always hard but anyways i love lemon this is not just my avrage comment that....was...AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  18. i <3 sasori ;3 awesome x3

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  19. aha, ew, in a closet?? lol. THAT was funny.

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  20. Ah, this was a nice story. You should really post some new stuff, I think I've read your Sai Story 5 or 6 times now, it's my favorite!

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  21. IT SUCKED!!!!!!!!!

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  22. It didn't suck. I loved it! :)

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  23. LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  24. thanks, i'll post some new stuff pretty soon

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  25. okay good! your amazing... lol i loved the reactions :P

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  26. MERRY CHRISTMAS!! lol

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  27. now that was a true work of art! now she can have puppet babys!!!!! ^.^

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  28. this is kind of going into detail.

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  29. omfg yummmmmmmmmmm sasori is sexy!!!!! your amazing!

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  30. Wow~! Awesome! You should do a story with Kakashi and Kabuto ;3

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  31. Is there a Madara one?^3^

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  32. I think you should do a lemon using Kabuto and Kakashi xD and you know the anime Mushishi? (Amazing anime) I hope you do one with Ginko
    (the main character) Hope you take requests cuz here's 3 for you XD haha rofl can't wait for more ^-^ ~Anna

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  33. OMG! Great story!!
    I love 7 minutes in heaven they can be so funny!
    or graphic!!
    MMMmmMmMMmMM!! Sasori is one Shmexy beast! I'd tap that! lol i already did... well according to this story!

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  34. Lol xD How embarrassing! I love you Sasori! x3

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  35. when you walk out of the closet, just say that you were faking those sounds. 0.0

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  36. I luv sasori! that lemon wus great!

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  37. LOL I'm in love with Sasori and when Zetsu said,"That sounds interesting!" and when Kakuzu said, "ewwww really? In a closet?" like a lil girl and Konan said,"No comment" i couldn't stop laughing. My parents even started to worry lol anyway WRITE MORE YOUR LEMONS R SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ROCKIN'!!!!!!!!!!!

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  38. i'm wet because of this and i like it

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  39. XD thanks yous! i was thinking about making some for them too, but i've never heard of that anime, i might check it out

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  40. urr really talented ! && Sasorii foreverr ^O^

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  41. I love this. So much. Very hot. :D

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  42. haha love the ending!

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  43. That was a bit much but still good. Please make one for Shino. I am in LOVE LOVE with Shino!!!

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  44. omg that was so cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!X3

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  45. Haha cool story!XD

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  46. That was good! XD my fave was the Kiba one cuz I loves nin-dogs but this story rocked either way! Good on ya mate! ^O^

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  47. ....i got very wet and moaned at parts just like ak. did! i read this at my modeling company... they were like "Jordan... what the heck are you watching?" plezzz make a shino one. i would love that soo much. i would even send you money. my name is jordan kuelling i have a myspace look me up if ur looking for cash... ^//^

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  48. o wow that was awesome. ur an excellent writer dont stop writing though ur the best lemon writer so far. i wrote some lemons on quizella but they were all deleted they probably sucked anyway...... o well..... anyway ur really kewl -_^

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  49. it was awesome

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  50. Hehe! How embarrassing is right! xD

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  51. That was some detail. love reading stuff like that!! Sasori's not bad looking not my fav. i love sasuke and neji

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  52. HOLY CRAP!!! IM ACTUALLY WET FROM THAT!!! MAKE MORE PLZ!!!!!!!!

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  53. This was awesome!!! 100/100

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  54. O.o ..... .... holy crap... that was one of THE HOTTEST things i have EVER read in my entire life.... <333333333333 sasori is so seme-ish i love hiiiiiiiim!!!!!!

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  55. I loved it! I have to admitt, that waz the hottest thing I have ever read! Plz make more!!!!♪♪♪♪♪=^•^=

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  56. Oh my FUCK doodles~
    I'm TURNED on.
    That was so fucking HOT. Ugh. <3

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  57. omfg im so turned on!!! I luved the last part, "How emarrassing" X lol MAKE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  58. mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm that was great mak a hidan one plez

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  59. I always got ticked off when all of the actually GOOD (graphic) lemons got deleted from Quizilla, but now I think I know where they are other than on FanFiction, although those ones are good too.
    Please make one about Hidan? U have all of my other favorites up here (Sai, Deidara, Itachi, Gaara, Sasori) oh, and Pein, too!

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  60. omg that was so great i loved it but now my best friend is crying because she wasn't that girl because she loves sasori lol

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  61. I can see their children now! "C'mon Pinoccio(sp?) Time for school" XD

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  62. lol Pinochio!
    Awesome story by the way

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  63. Could ya do a Kisame 1? And good job

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  64. you should so make a hidan one!!!

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  65. YOU SHOULD MAKE A HIDAN ONE

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  66. you should make a Pein one!!!!!!!! :)

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  67. lmao itachi just wants to know how long sasori can last XP

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  68. Heh, I loved it when all of a sudden, the rest of the guys started commenting...how embarassing. I'd love it if you'd do more! There are still some guys left...um, Tobi...Pein...um...well, I can't think of anyone else, but those would still be good to have!

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  69. do more do one with kakashi pein toby yamato orochimaru hidan kabuto kimimaru guy asuma jiraiya and rock lee make 1 for all of them and theres not many more guys

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  70. guy is guy sensei

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  71. omg sassori is sooo smexy thanks for making this.
    +

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  72. I'm sorry, but script format doesn't constitute as actual writing, plus this is just like every other Sasori lemon out there, where he's suddenly, magically human, even though it's been established many times in the series that he's a puppet.


    God, it's so hard finding any original content.

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  73. *MEGA NOSEBLEAD!!!!!!**DROOLS!!!!**blushies!!!!*
    *^.^*

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  74. FUCK! HE IS SOOOOOOO SEXY! I ALMOST GOT WET... BUT NO! I'M VERY HARD IF U WANT ME TO GET WET!! ;D

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  75. make more plzzzzzzzzz i beg of you there so awesome!!!!!!

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  76. Im turned on by this!

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  77. oh that was sexy lol hidan: wow just wow how umoral me:your one to talk hidan hidan:what's that suppose to mean!!!!! me:nothing :P

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  78. sasori is fucking hot even for a puppet
    is there a kakashi one & one with kabuto
    if not make them'your the queen of lemons
    you know bleach [anime] make one for ichigo
    and inuyasha you should make one of inuyasha and one of koga

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  79. There needs to be more lemons in general.. I think I've read them all. O.o I know some jerks are going to say Sasori is a puppet so he can't fuck, but GET OVER IT!! Use some IMAGINATION!!

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  80. i did not get some of that but it was still very good

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  81. i can't even make something as good as XD
    this was great!!!

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  82. Holy Cheezey!!!!!!! I got a masive Nosebleed i needed 10 tissues lolXD I luv it can you make one with Shino plz You got all execpt that one pweety pweese with a cherry on top :3 I completly blused at the sex scenes You are so awesome write more plz plz plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  83. HAHAHAHAHA! >///<

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  84. Uhh.. could you delete the post about Jordan Jukebox? Thats my real name, and I'm getting in very big trouble for that name being out their. I am not her! I have 15-year old girl. I do not like this. If you look up my name -Jordan Kuelling- that comes up. I'm sick of people thinking I read this. Please? it's really bad and hurting me deeply.

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  85. that was sexy! can u make a tobi 1. i think he is cute!

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  86. that really really really sexy! csn you make a deidara 1. i think he's sexy!

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  87. I really liked it, but I did have to chuckle at the mistype with his "growing excretion" besides that it was great

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    1. I'm really sorry this posted on the wrong story

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  88. i dont blush alot but i think my whole body was blushing

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  89. Guys, this made me blush like a b!tch. I have a crush on Sasori, so I was already blushing before I read the first word.

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  90. lmao deidara at the end of the story...XD...cant stop laughing at their comments and i wonder how deidara is at yaoi. if you dont know what YAOI is then look it up.

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  91. Can you make one with Hidan or Suigetsu, plz it would been an amazing story!!! <3 >\\\\\< Btw you write amazing stories!

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  92. >\\\\\\\< sasori-sama
    aishhh sasori-sama is so hot maybe ill be the one in her and ill take over

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  93. OMG!!!!!!!! >/////< sasori no danna I want to take over lol

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  94. aaahhaaaaa!!!! yas best thing ever nice work

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