Friday, April 17, 2009

7minutes in Heaven with Neji (lemon)

Sakura held out a coin to you at your refusal. She had wanted you to go into that small, dark closet over there. You made it clear you wanted nothing to do with this stupid game or what brought with it.

Sakura: “Ok, how about this, we flip this coin? If it lands on heads, you go in there, tails, you can go home.” You took the coin from her, examining it to make sure it wasn’t a trick. Then confirmed it and nodded.

You: “Deal. Whatever settles this stupid mess.” She smiled and flipped it into the air. Your eyes followed it as it flipped a few times then fell helplessly to the floor, letting a small thud follow it. Your eyes widened at the sight. Shocked that you actually had to go threw with this mess. You sighed and walked in there hoping you would still have your dignity when you came out. You looked around while walking in seeing the familiar face of a glaring Neji as you walked. Your eyes widened, you blushed, and you could have sworn you saw his glare waver as you turned around and attempted to walk out before the door shut in your face and locked. You panicked for a slight minute. Trying to wonder what the Hell you got yourself into. Then you heard his voice chuckle.

Neji: “Well if it isn’t the all innocent Akauri. I can’t help but wonder what you are doing in this type of game.” You battled for words as you thought of what to say.

You: “Well… What are you doing here?”

Neji: “I’m here to pass the time. I got suckered into to coming here by Lee; TenTen shoved me in this closet. Now here I am with you.” He said the last part with amusement. You heard foot steps and soon felt the space between your bodies lessen a great deal.

Neji whispered: “How lucky…” you gasped and froze at how close he had become. He was directly behind you now… You felt his hands land on your side and he moved forward still, pressing you against the wall. Your back was in his chest. You blushed and then closed your eyes trembling when one of his hands went up cupping your breast. You whimpered as he squeezed. His began licking and biting the shell of your ear while his hand that wasn’t on your breast slid down to your thigh where he rubbed sluggishly.

You: “N-Neji… Wh-What are you doing?” you felt him pressed his crotch into your butt. You gasped when feeling his growing excretion. He began grinding it against you making you push back and forth into the wall a little.

Neji: “Whatever the Hell I want. Are you going to stop me?” his voice was a husky whisper that made you shiver. You’ve always had a huge crush on Neji, and you’ve kinda imagined this moment for a while. But you never imagined he’d be this forward in taking you. The truth was no, you weren’t going to stop him. Neji began teasing you by whispering amusedly into your ear. He was almost singing.

Neji: “Answer me? Are you going to stop me?” his hand went up your skirt rubbing into your panties against your hot core. You jumped and squeaked.

You: “N-No!” Neji chuckled darkly again then continued more of his actions.

Neji cooed licking your neck: “Good…”He pushed further into you making you moan as left his love bite on your neck. The hand on your chest rose to your collar and pulled down hard ripping threw all your buttons leaving your shirt open and your breast free. Neji pushed you down forward a little causing you to bend slightly and he playfully twisted your nipple before pulling off your shirt. The hand in your shirt was massaging your clit threw your underwear making you squirm and writhe in his grasp. There were so many sensations happening all over your body. Neji’s mouth on shoulder and neck, his fingers on your nipples, his hand in your skirt, and his erection thrusting against your bottom. You felt your panties dampening the more he continued his actions making you cry out wanting more. Neji smirked against your skin only to stop his actions letting a small sob come from your mouth.

Neji: “Undress me.” He demand made your eyes snap open.

You: “Wh-what?”

Neji: “Take off my clothes, I know you very well want to.” You blushed a little more as he backed slightly away from you letting you face him. Of course you couldn’t see his face in the darkness but you felt around for his shirt edge. When you found it, you lifted it over his head and let your hands slide down his chest before you came down to his pants. You cautiously undid his belt before you zipped the zipper south and pulled down his pants along with his boxers and they both fell to the floor and he stepped out. You felt something warm and throbbing against your stomach and you grabbed it. Neji growled and moved his hips pumping what you now know as his standing member into your hand. You gasped at his size and your eyes widened. Neji chuckled and crashed his lips onto yours forcing his tongue into your mouth and soon gained dominance as he continued pumping himself into your hand groaning. You moaned back, making your one of your fingers twirl around his slit causing him to feel even more pleasure. Once it became too much for him he broke the kiss panting and grabbed both your hands placing them over your head with one of his and pulled down your panties and shoved you back against the wall.

Neji: “Enough. I want you now.” You nodded, giving him all the control, he hoisted you with the other hand and he plunged deep within your womanhood. You let out a small cry feeling his largeness in you and he kisses you softly making the pain magically lessen then began trusting into you. As his speed increased, you became more feverish in your desire for him and kissed back hotly as your climax approached. You screamed each others names and your juices mixed in you and then some leaked out onto the floor. You heard a giggle outside the door.

Sakura: “You do know that that was more then 7 minutes right?” You didn’t respond, you couldn’t respond in your state. You just stood there panting as did Neji and secretly thanked that stupid coin. You had to ask yourself. Did you still have your dignity? You'd have to say... Yes.

86 comments:

  1. i personally hate the people who reported you. it's a free country god damn it!! i love your work and it pisses me and your other readers off that someone has the nerve to report you!

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  2. thanks, that means a lot to me. i know right? some people... urg...

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    1. I AGREE.
      How dare they report you, your work is awesome! Keep it up <3
      Please write some about the Akatsuki :)

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    2. I love your stories i don't know how people can report you i mean if they don't like don't see .

      easy as pie :3
      Little Tokyo

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    3. That's true ! Your work is awesome !!! How dare they reporte you ???!!! Those c****ds

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  3. That was really good. Some people can be so stupid, if they don't like lemon's then don't read them. Your work is very good thought ^^

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  4. woot go neji! awesumm!

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  5. love ur story its very good ^_^

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  6. I luv ur work its sooo.........diferent but in a good way of coarse!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  7. WOW!!! THAT WAS AWESOME!!!! AND WHO EVER REPORTED YOU NEED TO GET A FUCKIN LIFE!!! >< but cool story^_^.

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  8. That was an awesome story.. ^^
    It really sucks, that people are reporting you and other pieces that contain lemon, but written badly not only in grammar but in style too, are still on this website...
    I really like your work and I plan on reading more from you.. ^^

    Sorry 'cause of my grammar.. XDD I'm german.. ^.^

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  9. lol, its ok, thanks though! :D i agree

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  10. whoever reported you is prob pissed coz you got more publicity than them lol! love your work :)

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  11. you know i never thought of it that way... thanks! ^o^

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  12. mixing jucies are we ? x.x it was great, i loved it ! ^.^

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  13. good job at the stories

    -darkfire2you

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  14. perfect master piece

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  15. holy shit, nice job

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  16. i dont't know to thank you or to tell you that you are a prure genuis and that if i see on the street id give you like the biggest thanxs ever!

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  17. finally i found a good place for me to read these perverted things....who said girls can't be perverts?;)

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  18. Wow totally awsome I love neji!! ~Nya xD You need to add more Cute characters though.... Chow ~Nya ^.^

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  19. I've read all of your lemons and they are all cool. Even though I dislike Emo Duck-Butt (Sauske Uchiha) this makes me realize why everyone likes him and his big bro. ;)

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  20. Really Cool. Neji is my favorite charecter. Keep Writing my friend! <3

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  21. that...was...HOT!!! keep up the good work girl your doing great!!! XD and the people that had report your beautiful master piece! T_T

    are some damn HATERS!!! DX

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  22. hehehe SEXY u r now my new best friend and to think i didn't even like Neji.

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  23. Great job! Oh how I love Neji-kun! x3 he's soooo hot!

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  24. you need to write a kakashi one for me please he is so eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee hot thatd be funny if jiriya shoved her in a closet and locked it for a loooong time NOSEBLEED!

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  25. i love neji and i love this story.you are awsome.

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  26. You rock, chika! Neji usually talks about stupid ass destiny and fate a lot, but you showed a side THAT DIDN'T THANK YOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  27. This is really good 7 min in heaven or more story! you should write more!!

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  28. no problem, maybe i might a Kakashi one,we'll see how the summer plays out

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  29. :3 It's his birthday in a month :D July 3 ^w^
    Why don't you have another one in his honor :D Love ya~!

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  30. f*ck the guy/girl who reported you these rock

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  31. edit-fuck the guy/girl who reported you



    these rock

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  32. omg, i've been reading all ur things and ;lets just say...
    *fangirl scream*

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  33. your a very good writer can you write some more??

    i truthfully loved them all!!!

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  34. your work is good. if people dont like lemons then nobody is forcing them to read them. they shouldnt report you

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  35. I was reading this while on my friends account and before I could finidh it she reported it!!! I wa like what the hellz. I love your work!! My fave was the shikamaru one :3

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  36. LOVE your work. PLEASE make a Shino lemon. SHINO IS SEXY. ( I love to get lost in those deep, warm brown eyes.)

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  37. Neji is HOT but don't let Tenten know I said that.

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  38. Neji is cool when he gets like that.
    (By the way, can someone reply to the post I set on Sai's lemon. It's hard to believe that no one has read that/has anything to say about that post.)

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  39. *Doubles thumbs up*
    Epic +_+
    *Dies in a pool of blood from nose bleed*
    X.x
    (Still an Itachi and Naruto fan though. <3)

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  40. oh neji i wish that can happen 2 me 4 real anyway that was the best 1 i fed so far

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  41. That was RAD i love the details. its cool that you thought of all that. i'm gonna read all of ur stuff.

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  42. i really LOVE these.....they r so cool

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  43. OMG OMG OMG!!! I HATE WHOEVER REPORTED YOU!!! THATS PERSON IS MENTALLY RETARDED!!! Wow...I could seriously picture that story!! keep it up! Make more!! V.V

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  44. i found you through quizilla and i have to say THANK YOU SWEET BABY JEBUS! cause seriously you have some major skills and your so comfertable with being descriptive! i love it and on another note your kakuzu oneshot on quizilla was so cute
    "it'll cost you"
    " I have five dollars" those two lines had me laugihing for a while.
    please keep writing and anyone who reports you is just jealous of your skills

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  45. people need more of these to read u should make more LEMONS!

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  46. It so dumb people report if you don't like it don't read it. Its tht simple

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  47. Fuck those bitchy bastards who reported you Ps.they crap in there own mouth and suck on there father's dick

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  48. Heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy i'm commenting again sorry everytime i read these i want to comment again i really like ur ideas and i wish i personally knew u cuz u would be a cool friend. i love ur ideas neji is cute and hot at times. i like sasuke and i'm not gonna be bitchy and say he's mine. if he were real i doubt he'd like me so its cool if other ppl like him. when u say u like Gaara lots does that mean love like or u think he's a cool character? i think he's a cool character but i dont love him love like. Please comment back if u can. and Thanks for all that u do! ur stuff is incredible i wish i could write like this. its fun to give detail but i can't do it the way u do. i know this comment is long but if u can comment back on mine i am the shay that keeps writing comments now i'm gonna put my nickname so you'll know who i am its Shay Burg just so ya know.

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  49. wow, someone reported you, thats messed up. i thought it was a great lemon

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  50. o_o i laughed at the End.. it Gave me memories Of Video in Health Class... o.o For Learning Purposes Only xD

    Greeeat Story..Thing o-o

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  51. Nice. I never new Neji was a demanding person! Oh well it did make to story more interesting!

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  52. That was so amazing :) you are such an awsome person for making these!!! Thank you so much!!!!! :D

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  53. This was...amazing! :)

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  54. AMAZING! Have you ever thought about doing this with a different anime?

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  55. Cool story,and nice work,those people who reported you are idiots.

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  56. fuck those people who reported you
    your very good
    they need a god damn life

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  57. your totally awesome! keep writing u've got real talent!

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  58. Awsome still my work is nothing next to your.

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  59. That was great, you have some serious writing talent! :)

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  60. Awsome, u got some really good writing skills!

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  61. I agree with the one right above this the story is awesome I love lemons and Naruto!!! :3

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  62. i love neji <3 <3

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  63. people like to read different things and to those who doesn't like lemons i have just one thing to say.....WHAT THE HELL IS YOUR PROBLEM?? DON'T BLAME HER, WHY WOULD YOU READ IT IN THE FIRST PLACE !DON'T! LIKE IT !DON'T! IT
    i love your lemons i have only read neji and gaara but keep going okay ^ A
    U

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  64. sorry i meant !DON'T! LIKE IT !DON'T! READ IT

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  65. *licks lips* yummie yummie

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  66. So awesome!!! I love Neji!! Keep writing!! :D

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  67. Your stories are great! I love how you always add something funny! (at least to me lol)

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  68. could you do shino!? he is my fav.

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  69. I love this so much~ I'm a diehard Neji girl, even if he's dead >~< he shall live on forever! Okay, too dramatic haha, but seriously. Awesome work~!

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  70. even though your story was a little weak if that person didn't like your story then they shouldn't have read it and to all you people who like to report people for writing lemons, KISS MY ASS

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  71. oh my gowd so hot but not as hot as sasori-sama

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  72. I loved it :3

    BUT YOU NEED TO GO ON WATTPAD RIGHT NOW.

    SOMEONE COPY AND PASTED AND POSTED YOUR STORY AND USED IT AS THEIR OWN WORK!!!!

    Reclaim your story!!

    Hehehe, that is if the user on wattpad.com isn't you....

    But if it isn't please get your story back!!

    The user is: jadethekiller

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